Ann

I ache.

Ann

Give me love again

for I will cherish it.

I will hold it dear

and kiss each breath.

Here I stand

naked in my grief.

Wishing,

just wishing

to feel you,

my only love,

once more.

 

14/06/15

Author's Note

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

I truly admire your style. It is quasi-modern, quasi-olden, but timeless and timely. Every girl, I am sure, wishes for their love to speak in such poetic and romantic way to them sincerely and lovingly.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

That is such a kind thing to say. I was married to her for sixteen years and she bore me two adorable children who I raised. Thank you Nadia.

[R Smith]

the wishing to be with your love again, very poignant John, you have a romantic style of writing that comes across so well :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I guess when you truly feel something it is difficult not to express it! Thank you Richard.

[h d e rushin]

a lovely tribute for obviously someone very dear. I read you description and can relate to
someone so troubled that they take you kicking and screaming into dark places. What a
breath of fresh air a clear head can be..

well done,
dana

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Dana

[andrew mitchell]

Lovely work John and flows like a breeze

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A hurricane more like lol. Shot my mouth off about my feelings................................Thank you Andrew.

[Willard Wells]

Loss of love that cannot be revived is sad and leaves and empty heart. Very will written John. Lovely work. And of course your playing Norah in the background.

[ANTO]

I spoke my friend Sonia yesterday - she spoke of meeting 2 years ago, ''the love of her life' but his alcohol dependency made it impossible for them to make a go of it. It killed me to hear that from her.
I never thought I could feel as sad again for a friend as I do right this minute John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sorry Anto and thank you!

[ANTO]

Dont be - it was a privilege. Your very much welcome my friend.

[wordman]

a memory we all share,missing someone,wishing and hoping

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you WM you are a brick|!

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's a poetic reference I've always admired, to see a poem named after its intended.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

She was the mother of my two youngest who rescued me from my schizophrenic (true) first wife. Then left me to pursue her own dreams of riches. Thank you Kelly.