Sister Moon

This is a repost in memory of my son’s mother/in-law.

Loving mother nature’s child
giving freely never idle;
sing to me your celebratory tune
of happier times, dear Sister Moon.

When children laughed and played all day
while we sat back and watched and prayed
with hands that caressed and held them close
and knew the love we wanted most.

Loving mate and natural mother,
one of them outweighs the other.
Our children’s love is what we need;
to watch them grow and then succeed.

While yearning for the ties that bind
we have their love, the richest kind.
So sing your song oh Sister Moon
and share with me your joyful tune.

Reviews

[mou]

Parents and their protection are the greatest shield for a child. The love, care, tenderness, and the support are reflected in your every word. There are only parents who don't wait for a return. You've drawn those serene moments of family beautifully. Also the rhyme makes the read so pleasant. Thank you for sharing this wonderful work, dear poet.
- mou

[Dara]

Thank you for this wonderful review. You said it all so well, too. I am still feeling her loss. She was one of those exceptional mothers who sadly is gone too soon. Her daughters have such a void now that only time may heal. I am so happy you enjoyed this tribute to her.

[mou]

I feel truly sorry for the loss. And it is my sincere pleasure to read your words.
- mou

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Very tender and loving verse revealing a deep appreciation and empathy. Family is a wonderful anchor like the roots of a tree. Unfortunately, sometimes we must weigh anchor to sail. Wolfe said, You can't go home again, but I think maybe you can...it doesn't mean that "home" will be the same or mean the same, though. I know since my own mother passed, the old homeplace just doesn't seem the same. I enjoyed your poem. F.

[Dara]

Thank you for this very beautifully written review. It reads like poetry itself! Yes, family is everything and it’s overwhelming sometimes when we lose one of them. I am sorry for your loss of your mother. Losing a parent or child is the worst thing. Take care!

[Chris Shaw]

A beautiful tribute here Dara. Your stanzas I found touching to read. Reflections on times gone by, but remembered with love and affection. Motherhood, such a gift. Our children’s love is what we need. So very true. Have a happy Easter.

Chris

[Dara]

Thank you so much Chris. She was a phenomenal mother with a bigger than life personality. I wrote this many years ago during happier times but it is comforting for me now. Take care and Happy Easter to you too!

[emmajoygreen]

How beautiful, dear lady! You bring such joy and life to poetry, have a mind and imagination that makes magic even with what could be a sad tribute. Many thanks for sharing at such a special time too. Happy Easter, my friend

[Dara]

Dear Emma, you are too kind. Your words always remind me why I enjoy writing poetry and to try to keep keeping on. :-) I hope life is treating you kind my friend. A Happy Easter to you as well!

[Patricia Wedel]

Dear Dara… Mother-in-laws have so much in Common. Crochet’d Dollies of Memories where two can set their Coffee Cups…. Amazingly sentimental and Gracious. softly, Pat

[Dara]

“Crochet’d Dollies of Memories “ so very beautifully summed up. Thank you Patricia. Your thoughts mean a lot to me. I hope you are doing well.