Billows of Snow Swept Dreams

Under the Cover of Night in Moonlight Dreams 

The Stars danced in Rendezvous of sweet delight... 

Billows of  bright diamonds fell to Earth covering 

the trees with Soft Snow where Cardinals Pray... 

Candles lit in Windows where Children slept as 

Kittens cuddled in Mittens of rainbow colors... 

We were snow-bound for a Day to contemplate 

the Wonders of soft Angel Wings where Miracles 

are scattered about for all the faithful devout 

who never doubt the Persuasion of Pure Love... 

 

Reviews

[Zoe Richardson]

Such incredible imagery here! I could see the snow, how it wraps the world in white and makes you feel like you are living in a snow globe scene. I especially love the image of the red cardinal praying in the white snow. Such a striking contrast, and a lovely one! I miss snow, but not enough to venture north again.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Zoe…your review is lovely and seems to blend with my poem. The first snowflakes were very large Lace-like and hundreds floated around and settled like Angels on the Branches of Evergreen Trees.
It was very poetic. I do love 💗 the change of Seasons; however as you become older … you do not plan to Snow Ski as you may have when you were younger. Thank you for stopping by. gently, Pat

[Pete]

quite the lovely snow-covered scene you paint with words and imagery.

stars dancing in rendezvous of sweet delight

love the last line too - so hopeful. brrr, thanks for lighting the warm fire of faith and melting some hearts pat ... :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Pete... thank you for your gracious review of our recent Snowfall. It seemed to fill the atmosphere with calm pure feelings that resonate during this time of uncertainty. The beauty of Nature is very healing as we keep our faith in love and hope. tenderly, Pat

[Pete]

amen ... :)

[Fran Marie]

What lovely verse this truly
is..brim full of beauty in
vivid imagery, as cold as it
is I still love the white snowfall
Its just so magical just like
your poetic words..awesome write
dear poet...

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fran… this Winter… I worry about the Immigrants and Trust that they stay warm… If only they could survive as well as our feathered friends. Thank you for stopping by. Be warm and safe. gently, Pat

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

Billows of bright diamonds fell to Earth covering
the trees with Soft Snow where Cardinals Pray...
Candles lit in Windows where Children slept as
Kittens cuddled in Mittens of rainbow colors...

Such beautiful words here, this whole write is beautiful, love the imagery so much,
lovely write

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Kesch… your Review is soft and gentle as gossamer wings and my heart 💜 sings … be still and listen to the Wind. gently, Pat

[Writergurl]

This is such a lovely write, really enjoyed this

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Writergurl… ❤️ lovely that you enjoyed my poem .. forgive me for being late … wishing you a warm Hearth and and a Cup of Broth…. to Cheer you. tenderly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful dear Pat. Your words make the reader see and believe your words. Thank you dear friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John.. lovely to see you again.. Snow reminds me of the 🎶 Song— “Begin the Beguine “. I can imagine you Dancing 💃 in the Snow…. making Angel Wings … thanks for leaving your dance steps embedded. gently, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Pat and you are welcome.

[Cherrie Palmer]

We had the best kind of snow. Got about 6 inches on a 3 day weekend. Then yesterday it was 52.
Hang in there and stay warm.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Cherrie… 💕 lovely you had Snow.. for the young ones, it is a Paradise… for me it is Heaven full of Feathers with Colorful Birds who sing in Acapella. We will have our third Snow this Weekend. We can be Kids again. ❤️ love and warmth.. Pat

[Neville]

although predominantly a dog and a bird man .. me being a hornythologist and all that .. I do have a thing about kittens too .............. so there ya go Pat .. luv ya like a fat kid luvs cake with a cherry on the top :) x

[Patricia Wedel]

We have had our second Snowfall and expecting a third Triplet soon. If I shook my Snow Globe there would be bright diamonds falling with a Horse and Sleigh in the Snow… 🎶 singing Jingle 🔔 Bells .. Happy New Yesr 2022…. Triple twos and Snow .. ☃️ Frosty the Snow Man is a Jolly Guy like you💜. Pat Petunia

[Neville]

say hi to Frosty for me .. but gently, I heard he thinks I melted late last year ......... 💜x

[Ada]

This is a very tender poem that uplifted the human spirit in an age where everything seems so harsh.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Ada… I have rewritten my appreciation of your review … we do need our Spirits uplifted. It was lovely to see hundreds of snowflakes float down with blessings of Salvation from the Lord above. tenderly, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

A beautiful piece Pat, a snowy scene, but happily tucked in; contemplating the wonder of winter with such colorful images, rainbow mittens and all, including all the winter birds you love, and love itself.
Best, B

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Betty.. you have an endearing way of expressing feelings… Snowflakes are delicate prayers for Healing in a World of Uncertainty. Ice cycles are Chimes of better times. May your days bring Joy to your 💜..Heart.. truly, Pat