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Moody Moon in June

Moody Moon in June

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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The Moon curled around as the Cat purred softly...

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Once upon a Midnight Mist I pondered the Moon 

surrounded by a thousand Stars where moonbeams 

dreamed of romantic Rendezvous where passions play... 

The Curtain of Sapphire swayed and the Drama began. 

Oh Romeo where art thou... and He slowly Bowed... 

and promised to be true to his lovely Juliet who knew 

it was only an Adventure with a Sad Ending... so she 

drank the Wine and went to sleep forever... 

 

© 2022 Patricia Wedel


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A most famous story of forbidden love ending in a tragic outcome. If only families gave their blessing, the outcome would be different. It happens every day and all over the world.
At least you are safe Pat for you found your hubby.
Now, moonbeams are a stimulus to a great rendezvous .

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest Sami… you have the “touch” of a golden Sunrise where Love becomes a Diamond forever….. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

Wowzy woo! Thank you kindly. You too. You are welcome Patricia Wedel.



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A sad ending after a beautiful view

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

dear Stuart… I appreciate your charming Review. May your Summer be mellow… and you are a happy .. read more
Stuart Munro

1 Week Ago

Thanks Pat ,May your sleep be sound and your dreams become real
A lovely poem with predicted sadness....thank you Romeo and Juliet. Nicely penned and, an enjoyable read. Thank you! Temp

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Weeks Ago

dear Temp… there are a trillion stories in the World… we can give it a Whirl… thanks for touch.. read more
Temperance

2 Weeks Ago

Yes there are and, you do a wonderful job in sharing them with your artistic creativity. I love read.. read more
June can be a romantic month. I got married on June 1st, more years ago than I care to admit! But not all romances end happily, of course, as you allude to with your Romeo and Juliet reference. A nicely penned poem, with a dreamlike quality to it!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Weeks Ago

dear Robert… the best we can do is to bring the Best out of each other and try to be a Dream come .. read more
Ah.June be it the romantic month
of roses romance pearls and dreams
and even so still can be heartbreak
with sad endings such as Romeo
and Juliet. nice work

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dearest Fran… love 💗 your poetic Review… a string of Pearls and a new Moon with flowers in Ju.. read more
  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

you're welcome dear poet🌷
A most famous story of forbidden love ending in a tragic outcome. If only families gave their blessing, the outcome would be different. It happens every day and all over the world.
At least you are safe Pat for you found your hubby.
Now, moonbeams are a stimulus to a great rendezvous .

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest Sami… you have the “touch” of a golden Sunrise where Love becomes a Diamond forever….. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

Wowzy woo! Thank you kindly. You too. You are welcome Patricia Wedel.
It may be no piece but the first stanza you're alone because you ponder June is the month of bride's the drama is a forbidden love that could be true. But that's what's what I see when I read. Thank you for sharing.
I enjoyed reading.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Mauricio Montoya

2 Months Ago

Sorry I'm working from my phone. Typos it may be one piece but it has stanza great flow
Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

Thank you Mauricio… reading between the Stars in the Sky… and the Misty Moon…. Gently, Pat
A beautiful poem dear poet. In the end. Do we accept less?
"so she
drank the Wine and went to sleep forever..."
Tonight I drink the whiskey, maybe tomorrow I drink the coffee. I enjoyed the poetry dear Pat. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest John… so many Sad stories that were written in the Times of Family Names that were enemies.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

You are right dear Pat. The old lullabies, rarely do have a happy ending.
Romance. Get together. Im buying it. Thanks fir sharing

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dear Ranger… back in Shakespeare’s day,, there were only Word's on a Stage where Emotions play. .. read more
Ranger Kessel

2 Months Ago

You're welcome
Lovely romantic scene to a tragic and beautiful love story… classic on both counts!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest Patricia… your review is a Pearl of cultured sweetness. I can hear the Piano keys playing.. read more
Patricia

2 Months Ago

Awww! :) so sweet
Dreaming of 'romantic Rendezvous where passions play'.
Such beautiful, soft imagery... with a gentle warning against romanticising.
Unlike Juliet who saw through the rose tinted glasses and took control of her Sad Ending.
So bittersweet - a battle that can't be won, it seems, not through victory or defeat.
Lovely! I'll likely read this several more times.


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest Laura Kate… I appreciate your Theatrical review that touches our own sometimes Bittersweet.. read more

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Added on June 5, 2022
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