Moody Moon in June

The Moon curled around as the Cat purred softly...

Once upon a Midnight Mist I pondered the Moon 

surrounded by a thousand Stars where moonbeams 

dreamed of romantic Rendezvous where passions play... 

The Curtain of Sapphire swayed and the Drama began. 

Oh Romeo where art thou... and He slowly Bowed... 

and promised to be true to his lovely Juliet who knew 

it was only an Adventure with a Sad Ending... so she 

drank the Wine and went to sleep forever... 

 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A most famous story of forbidden love ending in a tragic outcome. If only families gave their blessing, the outcome would be different. It happens every day and all over the world.
At least you are safe Pat for you found your hubby.
Now, moonbeams are a stimulus to a great rendezvous .

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Sami… you have the “touch” of a golden Sunrise where Love becomes a Diamond forever… thank you Sami for your Blessings… and I wish you Love Ike Venus the Evening Star. tenderly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy woo! Thank you kindly. You too. You are welcome Patricia Wedel.

[Stuart Munro]

A sad ending after a beautiful view

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Stuart… I appreciate your charming Review. May your Summer be mellow… and you are a happy Fella. gently, Pat

[Stuart Munro]

Thanks Pat ,May your sleep be sound and your dreams become real

[Temperance]

A lovely poem with predicted sadness....thank you Romeo and Juliet. Nicely penned and, an enjoyable read. Thank you! Temp

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Temp… there are a trillion stories in the World… we can give it a Whirl… thanks for touching down… gently, Pat

[Temperance]

Yes there are and, you do a wonderful job in sharing them with your artistic creativity. I love reading your work. Temp

[Robert Haigh]

June can be a romantic month. I got married on June 1st, more years ago than I care to admit! But not all romances end happily, of course, as you allude to with your Romeo and Juliet reference. A nicely penned poem, with a dreamlike quality to it!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Robert… the best we can do is to bring the Best out of each other and try to be a Dream come true… it is not easy when you cannot be everything the other Dreams; however you can dazzle like a Star when the lights are dim. fondly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Ah.June be it the romantic month
of roses romance pearls and dreams
and even so still can be heartbreak
with sad endings such as Romeo
and Juliet. nice work

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fran… love 💗 your poetic Review… a string of Pearls and a new Moon with flowers in June. Vows of forever Love… two Doves Coo… thank you Fran Marie… gently, Pat

[Fran Marie]

you're welcome dear poet🌷

[Mauricio Montoya]

It may be no piece but the first stanza you're alone because you ponder June is the month of bride's the drama is a forbidden love that could be true. But that's what's what I see when I read. Thank you for sharing.
I enjoyed reading.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Sorry I'm working from my phone. Typos it may be one piece but it has stanza great flow

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank you Mauricio… reading between the Stars in the Sky… and the Misty Moon…. Gently, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem dear poet. In the end. Do we accept less?
"so she
drank the Wine and went to sleep forever..."
Tonight I drink the whiskey, maybe tomorrow I drink the coffee. I enjoyed the poetry dear Pat. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest John… so many Sad stories that were written in the Times of Family Names that were enemies and kept Lovers from
Having a Life together… Juliet though Romeo was dead and she drank the Poison and sealed their Fate. So Sad… tenderly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear Pat. The old lullabies, rarely do have a happy ending.

[Ranger Kessel]

Romance. Get together. Im buying it. Thanks fir sharing

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Ranger… back in Shakespeare’s day,, there were only Word's on a Stage where Emotions play. Thanks for your Review. Gently, Pat

[Ranger Kessel]

You're welcome

[Patricia]

Lovely romantic scene to a tragic and beautiful love story… classic on both counts!

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Patricia… your review is a Pearl of cultured sweetness. I can hear the Piano keys playing softly… gently, Pat

[Patricia]

Awww! :) so sweet

[Laura Kate]

Dreaming of 'romantic Rendezvous where passions play'.
Such beautiful, soft imagery... with a gentle warning against romanticising.
Unlike Juliet who saw through the rose tinted glasses and took control of her Sad Ending.
So bittersweet - a battle that can't be won, it seems, not through victory or defeat.
Lovely! I'll likely read this several more times.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Laura Kate… I appreciate your Theatrical review that touches our own sometimes Bittersweet Rendezvous. Shakespeare said that Life is a Stage and we are all Actors. tenderly, Pat