A Way to Remember

A Way to Remember

A Poem by Penwhill

A is for Apple

I is for....well...I

S is for I am Seriously running on fumes

S is also for Save me the Sermon

B is for Ball

L is for Love! 

  A can also be for Anything I do is never enough and you never fail to remind me that my mere existence is an embarrassment to you!

 

R is for Rainbow!

T is for Thanks

K is for Kitten

O is for Occasionally you Oblige you motherly duties and I wish you would do so more often...

C is for Cinnamon Cookies

U is for Unkind, Unloved, Underappreciated, Unaffected, Unabashed, Unconditional

L is for Love Love Love Love Love Love Love

 

© 2018 Penwhill


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I don't know but this comes across to me as a plea in a poem of a feeling you want to say but aren't sure if you should...but then you did, and it comes across very starkly and authentic with a tint of sadness and longing to it very interesting flow and format I had to come back to this a few times:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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I don't know but this comes across to me as a plea in a poem of a feeling you want to say but aren't sure if you should...but then you did, and it comes across very starkly and authentic with a tint of sadness and longing to it very interesting flow and format I had to come back to this a few times:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you for further explaining your poem. No worries about inadvertently deleting my review. I wonder if you are familiar with the poetic form called "Acrostic" -- where every first letter of all the lines taken together spell out a word or two or three that are the meaning of a poem message. To me, yours is an acrostic poem & it would be helpful to get the translation of the vertical spelling in an author's note! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago



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