the haven for a soul

the haven for a soul

A Poem by ALFRED
"

hope is what we need, a Lil peek from into my head

"

 

It's not the end,

But it's not going to last forever.

Don't destroy what I have left now!

Let us unite and celebrate the differences we have.

 

The warmth of hugs,

The love of family,

The kindred souls around.

Why lose it all now?

 

Wisdom beyond boundaries,

Creatures so civilized,

Beings blessed with discernment.

Why bound it all now?

 

Beautiful people far and wide,

The Cosmos enthroned with so much grace,

Constantly in a battle to end disparity.

Why turn it all into a dreadful abyss?

 

It may sound absurd,

Mankind, the most perilous force,

How gnarly the works of our hands are,

But there's still time to heal, to become what we dreamt of.

 

The night is young,

Full of life we all can be,

How beautiful will be the universe

Lit up with hope, joy, and peace.

 

Hold hands not grudges,

Share hope, not sorrow.

Rejoice with what's to come, forget the past.

Break the barriers, forget the mistakes.

 

They ask me ‘why?’ And I say,

It's all for a better home,

A home for you and me,

A home, so alike Nirvana.


-alfred

© 2020 ALFRED


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ALFRED
this poem got me an award, hope yall liked it

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Rye
They ask me ‘why?’ And I say,
It's all for a better home,
A home for you and me,
A home, so alike Nirvana.

Love this part, this is amazing, very emotional read

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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ALFRED

3 Years Ago

Yeah, I tried to put myself in the calmest place and wrote it. Thank you for your review!
"hold hands not grudges" that line is priceless....wish i had written it.
a really wonderful poem full of hope...it depicts how brutally we might treat each other.
but forgiveness is a beautiful thing...and the past is the past.

j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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ALFRED

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, honestly means everything to me. Thank you for the review!
Now This is amazing, totally awesome. Love this write. Very well written

Posted 4 Years Ago


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ALFRED

4 Years Ago

Thank you! glad you liked it.

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Added on April 23, 2020
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ALFRED
ALFRED

Dubai, Middle east, United Arab Emirates



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Hey! I'm Alfred, 17 in the middle of UAE. I write poetry and i love to express myself in a very simple way. Poetry and music is everything to me. let that soul shine! Follow me on IG - @bexnnyy /.. more..

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