PRAISE

Praise...

 

Praise to her creator...

 

Wherever her little feet may lead...

 

May it always be to happiness, love, faith and life…

 

Praise to her creator!

 

Praised be that Almighty Power…

 

Whoever or whatever it may be…

 

Praise to your creator…

 

That showered you with so much beauty…

 

With a trusting, loving and daring heart.

 

You are so… so brave, my dear…

 

The most fair and bold of them all!

 

Praise to your creator!

I shall praise Him forever…

 

May it be Krishna or another, like Enki...

 

My darling… I bow down to thee.

 

Praised be your creator…

 

Even more praised be His creation…

 

Truly I call you Eve…

 

First among all women…

 

You can believe.

 

Praised be your thoughts.

Praised be your mind.

Praised be your heart.

Praised be your soul.

Praised be your voice.

Praised be your words…

Praised be… your body.

 

Praise to your creator…

 

Honey I will bow down and pray…

 

For you… and so may others…

 

That endure… just like you.

 

Praised be your love…

 

Praised be the goodness, and kindness…

 

Of your wondrous heart…

 

Praised be every single tear drop…

 

That shed… from your deep hazelnut understanding eyes…

 

Praised be the pain you feel for others…

 

That are not yourself…

 

By the almighty!

 

Praise you!

 

Praise you my dear!

 

Praised be your warm touch…

 

Praised be your kiss…

 

Praised be your sex…

 

Above all… praised be your company.

 

 

Yes… love…

 

Praised be LOVE!

 

Praised be you my LOVE!

 

And praised be me…

 

For loving you so much…

 

And so very deeply.

 

Praised be the date that we first met…

 

When we first talked…

 

Come together somehow…

 

Even so many miles apart…

 

Praised be technology!

 

And praised be your creator.

 

Praised be… all living things.

 

All suffering creatures…

 

Blessed be… all those that are chained.

 

And that are in pain…

 

Yes… my love… I praise thee.

 

Praise thee to the Most Almighty.

 

You truly are a Goddess…

 

Just like Rati.

 

Praised be… all your feelings and emotions…

 

Praised be… your beautiful Heart!

 

Praised be her creator…

 

Praised be your creator…

 

Praised be you… for everything…

 

And praised be me…

 

For loving you so very deeply.

 

Praise to her creator!

 

Praise to us that still feel…

 

Still are able to LOVE…

 

And somehow…

 

Mend our broken hearts!

 

Praise to your creator!!!

 

Hare Krishna!

 

Namaste!!!

 

Praise to Her creator…

 

Blessed be!!!

Author's Note

Felt like writing it... all down.

Reviews

[Soyam]

Wow...!!! That's so great!
She must be a very lucky one, to have you.

I owe down to your respect and feelings towards others culture.

Really needed to be praised!!!

Hare krishna 🙇🏻‍♀️

Thanks for this wonderful art!

[The_Ancient_Rock]

I hope so...

Trully I am the one that's so very lucky to enjoy Her company and kind words... almost every day.

She fills my sad world with joy and happiness.

Praised Indeed!

You are most welcome my dear...

I'm so happy, you enjoyed the poem!

Hare Krishna!

Namaste!

[W. Barrett Munn]

In the third line I would remove the word her on the end; it is unnecessary and interrupts the flow.

W

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are right... I'm using her twice on the same sentence... unnecessary indeed.

Still hadn't noticed that...

Thank you so much!

;)

[W. Barrett Munn]

Remarkable.
I felt while reading one slight bobble that is easily corrected but after that this is a publishable piece that I urge you to submit. “Rattle” might be a good landing spot to try.

Winston

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you friend!

Yes... I'm not an English native speaker or writer... it is my second language.

So it's natural a few bobbles will show up sometimes. I try to be careful with writing and grammar errors... and I try to avoid them...

Some things may be intentional, others not so...

Yes... I would like to try and publish something...

Rattle you say... I'll check that one out.

Thanks for the advise friend, and for the awesome review!

;)

[Chris Shaw]

This is a poem of deep gratitude. It was good to read because we all need to be reminded of the positives in our lives. Have a happy Sunday Ancient Rock.

Chris

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you Chris, for your awesome review.

Yes I am very grateful...

I hope and I'll try to keep it that way.

Yes we do need, to be reminded, that good things also happen, from time to time.

And to renew our faith in the Human kind.

Happy Monday Chris!

Blessed be!

;)