Set It On Fire

Dedicated to my dear school. *evil laugh*

Let's set this school on fire,

Let's dig out many graves,

So we can throw the corpses

When we are done with games!

The time for fun's not over,

For us it just begun,

Your screams will fill the night

Because you cannot run!

The doom is set upon you,

You better kiss that cross,

Even though it won't be helpful

When you find your life at loss!

Let's set this school on fire,

Just to show them what we can,

Salvation's not an option,

Murder is the only plan!

Author's Note

I know, not one of my best works. It's kinda very simple, but it didn't take me a lot of time to write it, so I guess the quality fits the time invested.
Anyways, leave honest reviews!
Thank you!
P.S. I'm not really a psycho...I think. XD

Reviews

[xSamilynnx]

lol i agree with river of glass... it seems angry but playful ^__^ your such a good writer!!!! i liked it alot keep it up :D

[Crimson_Catastrophe]

I like the gleeful violence of of this. It's very angry, and kind of playful.
Unique.
It kinda reminds me of one of my poems. (it's called burn if you care).
All in all, I enjoyed this.

[Invisible]

a little of balance, but still good.

[Pax]

lol...enjoyed this poem...

[Gretchen Clarke]

'Aight, GLaDOS. The world does not revolve around killing and neurotoxins, you know. Sheesh.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Yeah, I know it doesn't, sadly. lol
Anyways, thank you, Gretchen. :)

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!! Love this, it was amusing and filled my head with the many thoughts I've had to murder my math teacher.....hehe. Anyway, Awesome work!

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Thanks, Kenzie! :D I just hope my poem didn't make you feel inspired to put those thoughts into action. XD

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

*slowly puts down the flame throwers* of course not! *cough cough* heh heh...

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I have some fuel over here...not that you'd find yourself in need of any, since you're obviously not into all of that. ;) xD

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

XD No no, I don't do that.....anymore ;)

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Cops bugging you, aren't they? xD

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Unfortunately :P How long before a dead body starts to smell? XD

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I'm not sure, since I get rid of them right away...I mean, since I'm such a nice guy. XD

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Lol of course, of course. Well, I'm afraid I'm not as nice, I usually leave it nicely on their mother's porch. :)