Choice

What choices to make in your life?

Good or bad, make your choice,

Listen to your inner voice,

Stop pretending you don't care,

And dwell inside the heart's lair.

Your findings may leave you surprised,

With forgotten treasure you'll be prized,

Spread it all across the land,

And joy you will find so grand.

But you may wonder what to do,

If you find a loose screw,

But I will help you tighten it,

Until we fix every bit.

So the choice is trully clear,

Why the bad when good's so near?

Enjoy every breath you inhale,

And your liberty will leave a trail.

Author's Note

Tell me, what do you think? I know it's not a perfect poem, but it took me about 15-20 minutes to write it, so I'm satisfied.

Reviews

[Rosallia]

I like the third stanza a whole lot. Nice job, per usual.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I do love the sense of tidal rhyme, well done.

[Angelic Surrender]

I like this a lot. It hits home. Good work :)

[xSamilynnx]

its really good i like it alot... lots of emotion.... message me the story behind it?

[SuicidePact.]

I think its good

[jennifer little]

great job on your wonderful work thanks for sharing this with me i loved it