I Will Kiss Your Scars

I Will Kiss Your Scars

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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In times of need ... a true friend

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I Will Kiss Your Scars



Your history has no relevance

I acknowledge you as you are

Bygone tribulation left wounds

But you survived harsh lessons

To rise up to be much stronger


Reading your heartfelt writings

Reveals subconscious sensitivity

With undercurrent vulnerabilities

Where wanders a confused spirit

Searching for true love’s rescue


As past betrayal created caution

You built an emotional partition

With fear as its foundation stone

Thus using reluctance as a shield

Deflecting any fresh relationships


So as your kindred friend I promise

To cloak your insecurities in smiles

Forever my soul support is primed

If you need to call on my assistance

I will kiss your scars until they heal


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2019

© 2019 Phill Oz O'fee


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There was a time, not so many years ago, when this was exactly what I wished for, from a certain man in my life. But it's a tricky balance, being supportive of another person's healing gains, but not coming at this with a "fix her" approach. That's the perfect balance your words convey . . . this is how you stand by someone without assuming your assistance will be needed, just offering affection (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Precisely my friend - I never presume or push support, it is enough to offer and wait (but not too l.. read more



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So tender and understanding. I love the depth and breadth of this piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind and poignant review Lyn … :-)
great last line...and yes, we mustn't judge someone on the past...we learn from mistakes and we get better.
And if someone is scarred, that makes it harder to move forward...we need to lead them with our love and support.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Exactly how I wanted my write to project - thank you so much Jacob … all the best … :-)

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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