Heart of Rust

Alone, the girl cries tonight

Too broke to even put up a fight

Her heart broken by a guy she'd met

Who made fun of every word she said

Why did she have to be so different from all the rest

Why couldn't she just be cool and fit in 

 All she ever wanted in life was to be noticed

To have friends like all the rest

Someone in whom she could put her trust

But before she had a chance her heart turned to rust

Her last breath a sorrowful plea

"Please, never forget me!"

And with that she had fell to the ground

Never again to make another sound...

Reviews

[Drama Child]

Nice Rhyme! Congrats on your win!

[Tori Jones]

Thank you...

[Mauricio Montoya]

like how this comes together. the search for love can be tough. great job

[Tori Jones]

Thank you....

[Chris]

A lot of people stare into their loneliness night after night - hoping for a change...

[Tori Jones]

Yes, but unfortunately i haven't found any happiness or change...

[Chris]

Each day begins... and we take a breath and a step...

[Karmee]

sad write, but well expressed and written

[Amanda]

An intense and sad poem... I can definitely relate to some of this.
I am sending love and light your way ♡

[Tori Jones]

Thank you!