The Dance  of Sun and Moon

The Dance of Sun and Moon

A Poem by Melinda McQueen



The Dance of Sun and Moon

 

Mourning breaks,

Life wakes.

Flowing lakes

Give way.

 

Journeying the invisible rope,

The sun climbs to dismiss shadows.

Awash is the blue sky where clouds roam

‘Til returning home.

 

The sun meets

The new day in a greet.

Birds generously tweet

A song sweet.

 

High above,

The cosmos way up…

For years, many thereof

Have weightlessly hung.

 

The sun slowly descends

As shadows are lent

Yawning from a long day spent,

It’s at the evening’s end.

 

“Sleep tight.” says the moon

As the sun slips into a peaceful snooze,

And once more it dutifully looms…

“I’ll take over for you.”

 

Melinda McQueen Rodgers

April 25, 2023

© 2023 Melinda McQueen


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Amazing and beautiful words shared dear Melinda.
“Sleep tight.” says the moon
As the sun slips into a peaceful snooze,
And once more it dutifully looms…
“I’ll take over for you.”
I loved the above lines and thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melinda McQueen

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Coyote
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Melinda.



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Beautiful sunrise poem Melinda. As night gives way to day. Wonderful descriptive imagery and your posted image is stunning.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful poem...

I enjoy the dancing style quite a lot.

You have a way with words. I like it.

Keep it up! Soldier on!

Blessed be!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Melinda McQueen

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

You are welcome!

;)
Amazing and beautiful words shared dear Melinda.
“Sleep tight.” says the moon
As the sun slips into a peaceful snooze,
And once more it dutifully looms…
“I’ll take over for you.”
I loved the above lines and thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melinda McQueen

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Coyote
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Melinda.
Your language is set as if sung in the light of a moon, Melinda! Could be recited or sung to a harp or acoustic guitar, the notes floating over a sparkling midnight fire. Yes, your poem is so visual, the imagination flies, thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melinda McQueen

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the warm review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

You're welcome, Melinda

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Added on April 26, 2023
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Melinda McQueen
Melinda McQueen

TX



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Hello, I'm Melinda from Texas. I am a published author. I'm in a chair with Cerebral Palsy and writing is my outlet. I have found deep pleasure in writing poetry. Writing helps me express my emotion.. more..

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