My Thought- 4

My Thought- 4

A Poem by Priyanshi

Without you, I'll be-
Either a soul in sadness disguise, 
or a soul rising too high.
But it depends on me, which soul shall I chose to be.



© 2018 Priyanshi


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A soul knows how to balance emotions and will - both

Posted 3 Years Ago


Despairing.. Broken piece of soul need to recollect. U gathered fantastic in words

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Broken piece of soul still is recollecting and more need to recollect...hahaha....thank you so much .. read more
Of course. You have all the rights in the world to not just choose, but to make a choice the proves to be good for you or rather, makes you happy. We should not compromise our life just for the sake of someone who was dumb enough to give up on us.
I liked your thought. Keep writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

I agree with you, Zoe.
Thank u so much , for the honest review:)
Zoya

6 Years Ago

No worries
When I read Farhan's review (below), I have felt the same way many times myself, reading other poets who paint a sad scene like there's no life without some other person. But to me, your poem does not sound like that at all. Here you are showing the honest way that some people must summon their courage to go on, after experiencing heartbreak, choosing whether to let it smother, or picking a stronger path of survival. This is a quite complex message for such a short poem . . . good job! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much,Margie:)
I totally agree with you:)
Hugs to you too.
Happiness lies with in yourself

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

True, Farhan....Thank u so much. :)
i guess we should put more thought on leaving before we go,then we want have these decisions to make

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Yeah, right, sir.....thank u so much ,for the lovely review.:)
You are the only one responsible for your happiness, it depends which mask we should wear.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Absolutely right:)
Thank u so much, Najam for lovely review.
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome ☺
This is so deep. Short but thought provoking. Left me in awe..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Yeah....Keep smiling
how r u?
Mavericks

6 Years Ago

I am fine, i guess. Never been better. Aap bataiye!?
Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

acha....hum toh khub badiya hai:)

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