Where would we be?

Something for a little realization.

 

Where would we be?
by United Writings 
 
Where would we be
Without love?
Would we have nothing but loneliness?
Where would we be
Without love?
 
Where would we be
Without God?
Would we even be created?
Where would we be
Without God?
 
 
Where would we be?
Without hope 
Would we be lost unable to return?
Where would we be
Without hope?
 
Where would we be 
Without happiness?
Would we be searching for someone to make us cry
Where would we be
Without happiness?
 
 
 
 
 

Author's Note

Just Write what you feel

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

This is a good piece but i felt like you could do so much more with this piece... The repetition was good but i felt you could have done more in the center of the piece. A great write that is a good start. We take a lot of things for granted if only we could realize how much all of those mean to us in the world. Good job!

[Catechize]

PromiseKeeper,

During times of need and desperation, we are called to each other... this is one of those moments. Through the course of our lives... we learn, grow and teach many things yet none-more that represents attributes of true understanding than what you put into words wtihin your poetry...

So eloquently, you portrayed (in-my-eyes) how you have grown to understand... Love, God, Hope, Strength, Guidance, Compassion and Perserverance. Your judgment is one of righteousness, my friend. A journey that many of us choose to take the beaten-path upon; yet you have shown that there is still hope and a chance for change within all of us...

Let us hear and touch more of your words - for they inspire from your heart...

Catechize

[jesthepoet]

very nice!

[PENS FOR PEACE /TJ CALI..]

Great poem that reaches right down to ones soul! I know alot of would not be here without help from above!
Thank you for such a great poem! Keep writing from the soul for the good of all souls!
TIM

[Victor]

This poem really touchs you. I like how it makes you realize that some of the greatest things given to us we take for granted because, where would we be without Love, God, Hope, & Happiness? These are definitly the gretest things we could ever have. This write set emotion in me and should to all the readers. I really loved this, and thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Keep up the great writes,

~Victor