My Lucky Stars, Incommunicato

"be fruitful; avoid self-assassination"

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Published in Strays. Available on Amazon.

Strays is a collection of two extended narratives and more than forty love-themed poems, exploring the meaning of romantic love while we have it and attempting to find the healing after its loss. Found within these pages is the short story Gutter Dog, the novelette Ginni, and the poems False Skin, the Boy Who Wore Clothes, and the Black-Wit Reveller.

Reviews

[B-poet]

Loved the emotional journey you've displayed here in an epic & eloquent fashion. Lovely work Pryde. A thought provoking read. :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Bpoet

[Brittany Zedalis]

A fatally romantic spirit
from the highest height, I took the greatest leap
jumped without looking, believing I’d soar
alone … accomplished not even a wing beat

This entire piece is astounding. Amazing write. Your talent shines through.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Brittany.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i thought of "Eyes wide shut"

i know better but i refuse to believe, refuse to accept....i have been taken...in more ways than one.

like Steve said..takes a few reads to get full impact, but it is then sudden and dangerous.

jacob

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Jacob.

[kublakhan27]

One of my favourites from your catalogue without question...it required a few reads and may require a few more to capture the full emotional scope...line three is awesome, open my true blues wide, I love that. Awesome work Pryde.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Steve.

[Sami Khalil]

I have always been a man of faith since I was little and my relationship with God is personal for He is my
guiding light. I question all religions and think on things before I reject their doctrines or not. The truth is One but the paths are many like the sages say. You have penned a great one...:)...............

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[Michael G. Smith]

Sometimes we have to fall flat on our face before we get the message.

[Pryde Foltz]

Tell me about it. Thank you, Micheal.

[Frieda P]

Taking that leap of faith can be daunting, and sometimes we land flat on our faces unfortunately. Killer last line Pryde, left a lump in my throat.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Frieda.

[Scott Metro]

Tossing it back and forth until it gels.
A hard realization...
Coming to terms can be so hard.
Scott

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Scott.

[Scott Metro]

My pleasure...