Well, before I even read this poem, I was expecting the typical crush teenager poetry, and I thought that I was going to relate to it. I'm glad to say that I don't. :)
But this was really good. It had that suspence and mystery and then horror and sadness, all combined to create an almost twisted version of your average love story. It's always great to read a story with a twist!
It is indeed dark. There are those that cannot accept the humiliation of rejection. You so aptly pointed this out in a poetic work that shouts volumes about the darker side of unrequinted love. You have talent and hope to see more of your works come forth.
Well, before I even read this poem, I was expecting the typical crush teenager poetry, and I thought that I was going to relate to it. I'm glad to say that I don't. :)
But this was really good. It had that suspence and mystery and then horror and sadness, all combined to create an almost twisted version of your average love story. It's always great to read a story with a twist!