Nothing Important

Nothing Important

A Chapter by Shawn Killian

You say this is the end

And that it is nothing important

But then why do you spend everyday alone with your tears

You say this is the end

And that it is nothing important

But then why haven't you moved on?



© 2010 Shawn Killian


Author's Note

Shawn Killian
Wrote when i was 14

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A very good question indeed, I think many people have been in this situation whether male or female.

Posted 13 Years Ago


really moving :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Like Sarah said, simple but moving.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


As others have said, simple but to the point and packs a large message in minimal words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is simple but moveing

Posted 13 Years Ago


Again, simple and to the point, but packs a good message.
Lovely write-

harmony

Posted 13 Years Ago


they havent moved on because they can't. there is something always missing even when its the end of of something else... lol loved this, short but to the point IMO

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Shawn Killian
Shawn Killian

Stroudsburg, PA



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I am a gloomy goth, alone in a world of wannabe's. I write dark depressing stories, listen to dark, depressing music, and am absorbed with Assassins Creed 3 I am eager to talk to fellow musicians.. more..

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