The Heart Broken Cycle

 

 

      Today was another lie

 

      So easy, yet so wrong

 

     Wishing I could spread my wings and fly

 

      Listening to the usual sad songs

 

      Thought I could trust him, but yet that was a mistake

 

      Hit by his betrayal, back on the floor I go

 

     Wondering how much more pounding my heart can possibly take

 

      Every time I see him, his smile is like another throw

 

      I know I'll get over him, one day at least

 

      But for now I'll cry tears he doesn't disserve

 

      To me now he's nothing but a beautiful beast

 

      Seeing how he can move on so happily hits some hurtful nerves

 

      Moving on seems to be the hardest part

 

      Watching a fake love fade to black

 

      It truly takes a piece of my soul and my heart

 

      This cycle leaves me broken and cracked

 

    

 

      

 

     

Author's Note

This is to all who are going through this, bc ik I am:(

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

To me now he's nothing but a beautiful beast

Seeing how he can move on so happily hits some hurtful nerves


maybe sometimes it just appears that way, but people still hurt when they leave one another.. they just dont want to let up.. i know, its silly isnt it..

a nice write thank you for sharing it with us
Antonio :)

[dw817]

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Someone once said, no-one can make you feel inferior without your consent. I - know this is not something you want to hear right now, but it does apply. No-one can hurt us more than those who love us. There is great truth in that.

But at the same token, you have to take a stand and pull back. Not let yourself get drawn into possible manipulation and or mind-games. Love must conquer all. And good love starts with communication.

If he is hurting you, let him know. If you are hurting him and you didn't mean to, once again, let him know. Communication is key, lass ...

[Keith LaFountaine]

Young love is the most complicated of emotions. We all suffer heartbreak at some point, though some experience it more harshly than others. All that you can do is look to the future with a smile knowing that the majority of your life is ahead of you. Nicely written poem. You express the sadness in this quite well. Nice work, and don't forget to smile!

[ron]

Yes we go through this. It is one of the hardest things to get over and some of us (me included) never do. It leaves a hole that is the hardest to fill. I a hug could help you have mine.

[Dayran]

Perhaps what we miss most of all is about how well it showed us to our eyes. Nice write.

[Angel]

For some reason, I always think of the Wizard of Oz, telling the scarecrow that hearts will never be practical until they can be made unbreakable... Lord knows, mine has been broken so many times, it is amazing that there's anything left of it. But the Wiz also told that scarecrow something else that I have never forgotten...
It is that a heart is not measured by how much you love...but by how much you are loved.
And that old scarecrow was always full of love...

This poem actually made me weep. You have written out the pain of a broken heart, and made me feel it just as if I were that betrayed young girl...ahhh, the memories you have brought back... Now, as the old granny that I am, I can tell you...life goes on. Broken hearts do mend, and there are always other starfish in the ocean...
So, smile, girl! You are beautiful!!

[RainDancer1997]

Aww thanks:) You made me feel better:)

[Rosaria_V]

Awww this is so beautifully written! And you shared the emotion perfectly here.

[Avinash]

I m there . And I can feel. It will heal. Just don't try looking at it.

[JordanIsaacSmith]

I've suffered through similar to this in the past. Heartbreak is always horrible. Great poem.

[GirlOnFire]

Thought I could trust him, but yet that was a mistake

Every time I see him, his smile is like another throw

I know I'll get over him, one day at least

But for now I'll cry tears he doesn't desserve

To me now he's nothing but a beautiful beast

Seeing how he can move on so happily hits some hurtful nerves

Moving on seems to be the hardest part

Watching a fake love fade to black

It truly takes a piece of my soul and my heart

This cycle leaves me broken and cracked

This is a nice write, your feelings was well express. In life u cant have a perfect love story but u can find BETTER man than him to share your Story with him :)) Just smile and Laugh ^_^

[RainDancer1997]

Thanks girl:)

[Pryde Foltz]

You expressed heartbreak well. I used to beat myself up in times like this--yeah, like that helps--but it comes to this the deep you grieve, the deeper you loved. So cut yourself a break and if you can, give yourself a laugh.

[RainDancer1997]

Thanks for reading and for the advice:)