Rain at Last

'Am watching the power of rain

 

Rain at Last!

 

The rain has been silent

For some time,

Maybe for me to add

The words of rain…

 

“It’s raining though again

For nothing so sure

For the deepest intuition to have

Rain once more…”

 

The rain starts falling

Dissatisfied with the words

I produced, unmatched the rainy power

Morning, day, noon, afternoon, and

Night alone

 

No matter what, it is the rain

At last!

 

Stopping wordy pit-a-pat

‘Am only watching

Rain and rain…

Reviews

[quill of shadows]

wow verry well done
and how glorios the rain is as u describe it, somthing so ordinary yet misterios powerfull and vast keep giving vioce to the things around u indeed a rare talent u are

[Solst Rapture]

The last stanza is remarkable. When I began reading I couldn't help but feel as if I was reading something mediocre, unable to truly penetrate my stubborn and thick ego.

I perked up when you gave a voice to rain but then I thought, 'oh Cliché, my dear,' but then, right at the end, you used a syntax that had me feeling like I'd just met a truly innovative thinker, expectation defying, as if, like the paradox of rain - so foreign though totally familiar - it is unique, the pit-a-pat is unique, like no other rain, or moment of rain! Just like the stanza! It is no other stanza, no other moment of poetry.

"Stopping wordy pit-a-pat
‘Am only watching
Rain and rain…"

Truly original stanza, made my visit very worth while. Thank you for sharing.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

The rain starts falling
Dissatisfied with the words
I produced, unmatched the rainy power


This is such a beautiful piece of writing, so vivid and powerful...The entire element of imagery and visualization has been depicted here flawlessly.
As a reader I can really relate myself to this write, for me "Rain" here is an element of metaphor for a sense of satisfaction and happiness which comes in us after when our soul cry for the ending of all sorrow and suffering...so it is not just "nature at is best" but also the sense of symbolism at its best :)

Thanks a lot for sharing it here, it was a great write :)

[Christina2]

its been raining so much here, I dont miss it but I love it when I can sit and listen to the drops falling. Thanks for sharing, lovely words.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i love the rain, the tranquility that it brings... the feel of it pelting my skin when getting stuck outside in it... this is a great piece -

[Ray Hamilton]

Nature is a very powerful thing
Rain makes the flowers grow, that's a good thing
Nice nature write Ray { not a Poet }