To Them All

It's time to patch up all the inequalities; have it settled now...

 

To Them All

 

Lots have gone

To clear disputes

With others,

While

Lots stay and

Carry the old clashes

But at last, gone…

While others find themselves

Cowards and lighthearted

 

In their case a

Hearty welcome to their

Newly found lives

 

A few times

Passed by

Same thing started—

Mental mismatch, et al.

 

Congrats to their

Would-be lives with

Roseate familiarities…

Reviews

[Emily Elizabeth]

The rhythm to this poem is very upbeat and musical, and the flow is superb!
I really enjoyed reading this, your style and flair for writing is very inspiring. The imagery is prominent and sticks in your mind, and you write with a purpose and control over your words.
That is a certain gift and you know how to use it!
Fantastic write, thanks for sharing!

[Gandré]

The most unpleasant ineqauality appears to me the one between poor and rich. Well stated.. this poem bears an important message.

[Ray Hamilton]

A fine piece of work
I agree one should deal with problems and get them out of the way
Then and only then can one get on with living
Thanks Ray { Not a Poet }

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

fantastic piece - great message and put together very well...

[Kitty]

Nice poem. I like the imagery and the idea of the poem...

Great write!!!!

Josie

[emmajoy]

This isn't just a poem, there's a true meaning and great intent behind the words. Congratulations on a fine piece of work.

Thanks for sharing.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

A great message in a wonderfully succinct format. Thank you for sharing. Well said.
Light,
Siddartha

[The Autumn Faerie]

True to its core!
Fights should never become feuds!
Life is too short to hate!
Thank you for sharing!

[Ru Banerjee]

a very subtle and poignant poem with a razor-edged truth about life and us humans...in our case, what else can we mortals do than silently stand and witness the bygone clashes, the ironies of our mental mismatches and the perpetual errors and follies of our own lives? All of us carry within us a delusion of resurrection, which brings forth yet another resurrection of our own sufferings, and we are bound to live life, with it!
Keep writing, and welcome to Writers' Cafe!
Ru.

[Christina2]

Let's celebrate the goodness and relish in the positive aspects of life and forgive. What a fab piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Ms Jessica Renee]

You've got an excellent flow of words. Keep the poems coming and I will be sure to keep my reviews upbeat like a rhyme.