Eve

31/12/89 An ode to my daughter Eve with all my love

    

  Forty words

A labor of love sent with wings from above
heart of a Mother! 
with god's design etched upon her sleeve

Each new year

she reveals a world of wonder 
a future built on love
I had never known
Till Eve. 

Reviews

[augustus]

A few words can mean so much. Yours are a delight to read. Well done! I'll be following your work with an erect penis and anticipation!

[shadrach hah]

Hi Rapture, what love to sing to your daughter. What joy to fill her soul when she reads your mother's heart. This is exquisite poetry, a poetic gem. You say so much within forty words. A joy to read. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs always....Mike.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Exquisite poetic tribute to your daughter - its what creation is all about - near on miraculous! Great share my friend and lovely forty word format … :-)

[Rapturecapture]

Hi Phil thank you so much for your most thoughtful review! very much appreciated!
Rapture

[Chris]

Is there life beyond when the child leaves the nest... and we find their paths seldom include our own unless it is at their beck and whim?

Such memories await our tears in the night as we miss them.

[Rapturecapture]

Sincerely Rapture.

[Chris]

sigh... life as we live it is seldom as we want it...

[Rapturecapture]

True my friend so true!

[KCthelastboyscout]

A caring and lovely tribute. Mother-daughter relationships are always special in their own way

[wordman]

the mother of us all,enjoyed the write

[Rapturecapture]

Thank you very much for reading wordman, and the lovely review!

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Rapturecapture]

Thank you KC each and every one truly unique! in their own peculiar way.