I was married to a man who spent ages looking for batteries for the remote whilst bemoaning the fact he was missing his programme. I didn't bother to wonder why he didn't just get up and turn it over by the button. I just carried on watching whatever I was watching. :) In our house we call the remote the 'wand.' This should have a pic of Homer with it, Robin. My review is officially longer than your poem. Hehe, I am USELESS at reviewing haikus and senryus.
j'adore ! excellent work. It's rare to read very short poems from you.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
i sense that you know this person. Its intresting because i see only one word here that could possibly ever be a negative and thats the word "Fat" which could mean you pity or dislike this person who does this each day. I can also see how this is very repeitive considering it is all of 13 words. So ncie job there.
Nice rate from me Robin....
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
why robin, that's a perfect senryu that needs to be added to the group writings. ;)
I am a man , I breathe nature , I listen to the stars , I speak dream , music is my life blood , my words pour from my heart . I observe , my hands express .
Feel my words , look as deeply into yo.. more..