Temples

Temples

A Poem by Robin
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ouroboros in white jade

 

basho in the garden of dreams

 

a giesha winks

 

coy 

 

gentle palms attentive

 

a diamond on velvet

 

lipstick on glass

 

Red - I can taste it

 

lush words spill 

 

butterfly shimmers solar plexus

 

fingers glide spinal secrets

 

folded temples of origami

 

a romantic wrapped in Zen

 

lovers instinct - breathless

 

spiral concerto

 

my arms raise her

 

spread wings - free her

 

honeybee nectar

 

savored sun

 

naked morning glow

 

eyes in rhythm

 

radiance

 


 

 

© 2011 Robin


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I LOVE IT! So...... JUICY...So gorgeous! "butterfly shimmers solar plexus ,fingers glide spinal secrets" honeybee nectar

"savored sun
naked morning glow
eyes in rhythm
radiance"
You paint the most magnificent pictures.... Can't thank you enough for your wonderful writings.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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breathless~

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Nice images to wake up to, puts the rest of the day into perspective really.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i really luv the way u move ur readers soul.

__peace__

Posted 12 Years Ago


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captured the image..in perfection..beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Deeply soulful, a rarity to find in the modern day world. Romanticism written by a highly aware & in touch man. I rarely read romantic themes as I find it difficult to relate. However you put it out there as if real love & passion exist.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is wonderful work Robin! Stark and plush at the same time. Love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i feel like I read this with my soul along w/ my eyes. You are an inspiring painter of words. bless you my friend

Posted 12 Years Ago


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There is a poetic impression of this poem now in my mind. It borrows from greatness yet has only its own wonder to be amazingly refreshing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

radiance is the word here~ everything blazes beauty and love~ care and keeping of the art of language~the art of creative adoration~ exquisite~

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Not sure how to express my feelings with this piece.. so I will just say.. WOW, blown away!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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