Temples

Temples

A Poem by Robin
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ouroboros in white jade

 

basho in the garden of dreams

 

a giesha winks

 

coy 

 

gentle palms attentive

 

a diamond on velvet

 

lipstick on glass

 

Red - I can taste it

 

lush words spill 

 

butterfly shimmers solar plexus

 

fingers glide spinal secrets

 

folded temples of origami

 

a romantic wrapped in Zen

 

lovers instinct - breathless

 

spiral concerto

 

my arms raise her

 

spread wings - free her

 

honeybee nectar

 

savored sun

 

naked morning glow

 

eyes in rhythm

 

radiance

 


 

 

© 2011 Robin


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I LOVE IT! So...... JUICY...So gorgeous! "butterfly shimmers solar plexus ,fingers glide spinal secrets" honeybee nectar

"savored sun
naked morning glow
eyes in rhythm
radiance"
You paint the most magnificent pictures.... Can't thank you enough for your wonderful writings.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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Very beautiful. Your words create a fantastic picture for the reader.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this had an asian elegance to it that i can't explain but i think you know what i mean

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is your pure heart, translated in words. Well done Robin. Such an art of you and a journey to read...
Such a bliss for the one you wrote it for...
And such a painting on canvas for eternity!

~ Elisa Laura

Posted 12 Years Ago


Gorgeous~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"folded temples of origami" :) soooo so nice...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'my arms raise her
spread wings - free her'

some tremendous images in this gliding through the consciousness like liquid golds. Love that first line and the way the poetry builds. Stunning!



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the flashes of vision, and colour, and sensation which have a 'separateness' one from the other... yet coalesces into a beautiful poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

all is mind.
indeed

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Where the fyck do you get this stuff????

You consistently put out great, deep stuff......you're dealing with the devil aren't you? huh? come on? fess up Robin ;)

Mr. jealouse

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you wouldn't believe that a person could go so many directions at once, and never leave the temple

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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