Paper Planes

Paper Planes

A Poem by Rhianne Ney
"

a paper plane which became our bridge

"
Divided by a thorn fence,
I still made a bridge,
For the two of us to meet,
I sent you a paper plane.

A paper plane with my heart on it,
Words which convey my love,
Words which convey my feelings,
Words which connects us.

You're my pillar,
Even though I have a deadly illness, you gave me health.
Even though I'm weak, you gave me strength.
Even though I feel hopeless, you gave me a hand.

Tomorrow, I'll still send you a paper plane
A paper plane which became our bridge,
A paper plane that connects my heart to you,
A paper plane which you can keep forever...

© 2013 Rhianne Ney


Author's Note

Rhianne Ney
a poem dedicated to "Paper planes" by rin and len

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Vocaloid! Sorry I'm not very good in literature and it's terms but I know I enjoyed reading this, how you clearly brought out the feelings that paper planes were able to carry between them two. How it can convey things, connecting them to form a "bridge"

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your aspired review~ ;D



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it sounds very mystical and magical almost fairytale which i love. the imagery was solid and emotive. a very good read!

thanks for sharing, im happy that this is the first one i have seen of yours =)

pen on! mmmmmmkay?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

yeah, thanks (:
Such a nice rendition of the song (which I like a lot, by the way). You did Rin/Len justice. This poem is even sadder when you know how the song ends...and the part with the father makes the last line full of sorrow. Is that why you ended it with an ellipse (...)?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Yeah, sorry again (:
Writer #00

8 Years Ago

No need to apologize, plenty of people make similar mistakes (like me). I've notice your happy emot.. read more
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Yeah, lolz
Vocaloid! Sorry I'm not very good in literature and it's terms but I know I enjoyed reading this, how you clearly brought out the feelings that paper planes were able to carry between them two. How it can convey things, connecting them to form a "bridge"

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your aspired review~ ;D
Mesmerizingly heart-warming. I enjoyed it very much so. Certainly brings strength to the days we may feel weak and isolated. I hope to be flying on this plane one day!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

I hope your wish will be granted :D
Another great poem! You never cease to amaze me :o you're an incredible writer, and I hope you continue to write for a long time!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

I hope you do also...
if you have time you can watch where I got this it's Japanese but transl.. read more
Allycat

9 Years Ago

Just checked the video out..that's actually really cool :D
Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

oh, thanks... it really is cool ;D
This is a really good poem! I love how you based it on an actual song! (Rin and Len are so awesome too! XD)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KKBatoretto

9 Years Ago

Yeah, he actually writes some vocaloid songs, like Coward Mount Blanc and Mosaik Role by GUMI, he do.. read more
Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

Oh.. I see cool
KKBatoretto

9 Years Ago

^^
You are fourteen and you write this?!!!!! You have amazing talent! Amazing. This is a lovely poem with flow and metre and emotion. So well done!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

thanks for the review... I'm not kidding bout the age... I'm just counting three months until I turn.. read more
In love? hehehe

I see that you are falling in love with writing in repetition :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

yeah
Very innovative idea for connecting with the beloved one.
Lovely piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


zainul

9 Years Ago

Thank you lovely poetess.
I will explore its treasures.
Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

Thanks...
zainul

9 Years Ago

You are always welcome
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Expresses someones feelings for someone else romanticly. At least that's whatI think.
100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on August 20, 2012
Last Updated on April 2, 2013
Tags: vocaloid, paper planes, rin, len

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Rhianne Ney

Baguio City, the city of cold temperature, Philippines



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