Words that remain unspoken

Words that remain unspoken

A Poem by Rhianne Ney
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something I came up while I was waiting for my sis

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I sneaked out from the hospital to see you,
This is the fourth time and maybe the last time
I know how happy you are now,
I'm glad that you moved on.

You already cleared your head of me,
Now you're holding hands with another,
I'm happy to see your genuine smile once again,
I'm glad that you moved on.

I have to let you go, I hope you understand
I don't have much time left,
So would you please...
Continue smiling for me?

© 2012 Rhianne Ney


Author's Note

Rhianne Ney
it's not my feelings... I just wrote it...

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D: So tragic sounding... It makes me think of a girl just standing out in the rain, watching her ex run around with a new girlfriend, all smiley and giggly and stuff... And she's doing her best to be happy for them... *sniffle* This is so powerfully written...Well done. *respectful applause*

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Hey there, emma, thanks a lot for reviewing. Are you still okay with Giotto? *laughs
Emma Lee-Riviera

8 Years Ago

Ahaha yeah. ;)


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There's a lot of emotion in this piece. Nicely written.

Kaze~ :-D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poignant but well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem, a little tragic romance is always good now and then. : ). It reminded me of this song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9zTFxbQCrJI

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem. A bit of tragic romance is always good for the soul : ). It reminded me of this song:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9zTFxbQCrJI

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

I'll check it out then if I've time~!
Well sometimes when you just write something it turns out really good. Great write. It also sounds as the character will never see the one they love ever again.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

That's right, he will never see the girl again actually (:
Very good!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

thanks for reading (:
nice write and a traguc eeality if our era!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

8 Years Ago

yeap!!
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

(:
Muhammad Qasim

8 Years Ago

:)
It's so sweet 100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Ah, okay... that's why it's quite weird...
Ruby

8 Years Ago

And now I am Ruby sorry if I keep changing on you. But some of my friends and I having watching anim.. read more
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

I see...
This is really sweet and sad. It's hard sometimes to write something that is not your feelings and it takes talent to do so. You have that talent.
Keep writing
-PurpleQuartz

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

I will, please keep writing too

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Rhianne Ney
Rhianne Ney

Baguio City, the city of cold temperature, Philippines



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