REACH INTO ME ⁓ (tender)

Let the stars allay all sadness … Welsh Form: Cywydd Devair Fyrion [Kø-wiff Dé-yaar Vør-yin]

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I partake thee

with eyes that see

a brand-new world,

your joys unfurled

that hold all life

devoid of strife.

My sad-eyed girl,

this heart's a'whirl,

I pull you close...

you do engross

bright wonder of

yon stars above,

all worlds to come,

in promise from

sweet innocence.

Pure truth evince

for all to see

where we shall be;

oh, life's warm glow,

'pon us bestow.

So, Dear, hold me,

love's set us free

in your sweet arms'

embracing charms.

Reach into me...

then, you will see,

this heart beats fair

with You in there.

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Richard W. Jenkins

©2015

Author's Note

~ Cywydd Devair Fyrion ~
[Kø-wiff Dé-yaar Vør-yin]

One of the easier Welsh poetic forms
Four syllables per line.
Rhyming couplets:
aa, bb, cc, dd, etc.

"THE LADY OF SHALLOT"
(tale by Alfred Lord Tennison)
Oil painting by: JW Waterhouse 1888

All well-meant critique is welcomed! : )

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"REACH INTO ME'
richard,
I found my self bearing the reality of how the foundation of our world is upon the shoulders and hearts of every young college student and young adult. They are just beginning to find love, to find career and employment paths; their lives before them. We hold them in hope and good wishes for their futures. They will love, find spouses, build homes and families. Love will be there hope as it has been ours.
Beautiful poem!
blessings,
Kathy

[Richard🖌]

Kathy Dear,
The swelling impact from your words takes me deeply into your moment, rousing, stirring, pressing, penetrating emotions so smoothly … you make me want to start life anew.
Thank you, ever-so warmly, Dear Lady-Poet, for sharing your always intriguing thoughts and sensationally captivating feelings; and, of course your wonderfully gratifying compliment.

Blessings warmly reciprocated, M'Lady✨ ⁓ Richard

[Kathy Van Kurin]

This poem gave the life bursting forth of fresh and alive beauty. I suppose this is true at all stages of life but this poem had a simple honest power. Loved it!

[Richard🖌]

As I loved your review!

[Michael Wright]

Very nice poem an awesome format

[Richard🖌]

Gee,
Thanks, Michael!

[Zoey Ree]

Once again, your words have opened another world and sparked old-time romance! Your poetry is stunning and beautiful. Would love some writing tips from you!!!!

[Richard🖌]

Thank you ever-so warmly and gratefully for such welcome warmth and expressed appreciation, M'Lady … I smile all over!
Anytime, Zoey, just let me know … hugs to you! ⁓ Richard

[Richard Guimond]

thanks for the teaching

as most poetry the real way to approach it would be to ear it, not to read it
would be interessting to sit and hear the welsh poet flight in his forefathers language

our generations lack the listening to the bards, the troubadour the cyd and trouvere .....

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Richard,
Love your name, BTW … LOL!

It is an honor to write and share my humble poetic efforts and knowledge with you.
Not to overlook the deft raconteur, eh?

Of course, In Welsh, this poem would not rhyme in the words I've used! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Ronnie]

Great poem. Loved the images used and the rhyming.

[Richard🖌]

Gosh, Ronnie,
I thank you so much!

[~]

A poem dressed in the most beautiful promise anyone could ever wish to find. For what do we want more than to reside within the heart of the ones that love us and are willing to take our sadness away.
I like this form of the poem, it surely runs smoothly.
The painting is also a favorite of mine and it matches very well with the poem.
Lord Tennyson would approve for sure :D

[Richard🖌]

Golly-gee, Dear Skittles!
I find it amazing I could have missed your wonderfully thoughtful, insightful review to this wee little flowing Welsh verse of soothing romance.
That we share something that's a favorite, and you think it compliments my presentation, certainly gifts this bard's rugged mug a gratifying pleasance; actually, I consorted with Alfred on this effort … wink, a smile, and warmest hugs! ⁓ Richard

[Kelly Scheppers]

...simply beautiful, Richard! I adore the presentation...

[Richard🖌]

And, Kelly, I adore your touches of soft mental colors.

A warm breeze brushed my cheek ~ it was your breath! ~ Richard