This poem is so lovely it plays like a melody.
So tender and silky, it speaks to me.
How many hearts have you stolen or left throats swollen?
My dear man you are a rare gift with song,
Please don't keep me not waiting long
For another chance to hear your voice
Please understand I have no choice.
I'd love to dance to your tune
In the hour of midnights first June.
(Ok hardly is it advice to give or comment made. But I had to answer in this way, for to read your words is to dance in celebration to a man who celebrates women. Thank you for sharing
Posted 4 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
With a broad "Thank you" heart smile, Dear Audrey 🌸
Sighhh! Such a compellingly st.. read moreWith a broad "Thank you" heart smile, Dear Audrey 🌸
Sighhh! Such a compellingly stirring review you've gifted this doting poem and its graciously pleased author.
You certainly know how to catch a bard's attention, charming him with a delightfully sweet, warmly imaginative verse of your own.
Seems you celebrate men every bit as enjoyably as I do women.
For answering in the way you have, please, accept my warmest hug of thanks to thee, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard 🍃
In gratitude I write,"A tribute that outruns all others for 'Midas' has enhanced your touch. The charm of words is certainly there- blushes you seek to spare - for you the 'Bard', have brought forth words that for others would have been hard!"
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
Thank you, Dear Kitty 🌟
For showing your gratitude, too,
in a lovely poem r.. read moreThank you, Dear Kitty 🌟
For showing your gratitude, too,
in a lovely poem review.
There's nothing more lovely or true,
than feeling sweet heart breaths from You! : )
in thanks for the sweet years shared with you, M'Dear Lady-Poet.
With many happy hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!.. Awwwwww It's just such a sweet tribute to all the lovely ladies and their beautiful hearts, thoughts and feelings poured into poetry that captivates! Geez ya got it going on here...loving the imagery!! From that smitten bard to a parade of wonderful ladies!! ( ha! lithe, slim, strong or stout!!) Such an enjoyable read this afternoon. Thank you!
**** I have added a word in particular to my notes.."stygian night" :-)
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
Aw, Sweet Lady Susan,
I am sooo very grateful for You,
and the privilege of al.. read moreAw, Sweet Lady Susan,
I am sooo very grateful for You,
and the privilege of all we've been through.
You've made teaching such a sheer blessing;
plus, reading your poems, I'm confessing,
has been more rewarding than you know …
for, it's been divine watching you grow.
You are truly welcome, Susan Dear … yet, it is I who most humbly and gratefully thank YOU ever-so true! ⁓ Richard 🍃