Home is the Goal

Home is the Goal

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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Baseball...

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Lush green on the grass,
a bat's boisterous crack,
our Boys of Summer
are finally back!

There's brotherly love
alive on the field
while up in the stands,
a frenzy's revealed

The diamond's aglow
with our team of aces
their swift-winged feet
running the bases

Yes, fan behavior
can be quite erratic;
their only excuse?
They're Phillies Phanatics!

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Today is the Phillie's home opener. :) (disclaimer: though I love my city and our team, I do not condone or participate in the infamous Philadelphia sport-fan behaviors)

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Ok, the emblem drew me in and the poem took me straight to Citizen's Bank Park. Wathcing Rollins and Utley, Howard and Hallady, the crowd, the smells, the pretzels and cheesesteaks and baseball. Go Phillies. I am one of the biggest Phillies fans you will ever find and I am so thirlled I found this wonderful poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

I have been a Phillies fan since I was 5 years old listening to them on WIP on my transitor radio.
Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Wow - you really ARE a Philly homeboy! I think we have an old WIP mug around here somewhere...
Jack...

11 Years Ago

I actually got to go to Connie Mack Stadium (which you probably don't remember) when I was a very yo.. read more
Yes I have been to those games..lots of fun though...we always ride by the stadiums when we visit my mother in Aston..when it comes to sports are roots are in Philly.
Hope this is a good year for them and the Eagles.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice poem, haha. I am a big Phillies fan so this was a fun poem to read. I especially like how your rhyming flows nicely, it's not forced. And of course the imagery is great. Nice work. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
LeeAnne Elizabeth

11 Years Ago

You're welcome!

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