The Years Behind

What I've learned so far

The years behind have shared the secret

of getting up

after a fall

 

They’ve gifted love and laughter,

found the humor

in it all

 

The years have brought my share of loss

and figured

friend from foe

 

And taught the delicate balance

of holding on

and letting go

Reviews

[Jack...]

Once again truth rings in your words, Rita. this was very nice, short but definitely to the point. Great job.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Jack. Some things just need to be expressed straight up.

[quinfinn]

and here i was thinking this was going to be about the posterior of a year...you had me fooled from the outset. all kidding aside though, this is really good, simplicity in depth to the extreme. excellent write.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Quin - In a more silly frame of mind, I could give that "year's posterior" piece a crack... ;) Thanks for the serious, kind review, too!

[quinfinn]

yeh, i know that was asinine of me....you're welcome

[Jessica Gillitzer]

this is simply beautiful Rita
i love it, it is something I could really use right now to keep in mind. =o)
there is so much truth here and life lesson as well.
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[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Jessica! Glad you liked it!

[wynn]

Reminiscing on the years past... I have found myself doing that lately... Life throws us beautiful lessons. Thanks for the great poem! :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks for the read and review! Yes, Life's lessons are everywhere - we just have to pay attention!

[Derek ubuntu Dunham]

I have read several of yours and I think this is my favorite! Thanks for reviewing one of mine too!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you - glad you enjoyed!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

So awesome, Rita! I always love to read your works because they're all inspiring.
My favorite stanza:
"The years have brought my share of loss
and figured
friend from foe".
Sometimes friendship starts with an embarrassing moment or in an awkward way. But later on, we will discover that the person we meet in such way turns to be our good friend.

Thanks for sharing this. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you so much, Dhaye. The friend from foe lesson was one of my hardest learned; you are so right that our good friends often come from surprising places!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome. We never know who are our true friends. Time will test who shall remain our friend and who shall be our enemy...:)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Splendid way of putting it in perspective. Excellent read and write.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A sight yet telling piece that negates the feeling of most, well done, good read.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you!

[SyberRose]

Yes you have to know when to let go of anything...Nicely done Rita...could you tell me where you found that font...because I dont see it when im posting...or did you scan this.Whenever I paste my fonts like this they disappear and I have to choose a different one.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Rose. The fonts to choose from when typing on the site are limited, but I found that if I type first in Word, then copy and paste, the font stays intact.

[SyberRose]

oh okay...I just use wordpad...thats the problem...it looks nice until I paste it. thanks alot Rita....

[Marie]

THat's what experience does for us.