Cleanse

Lather, rinse...

When I get into a lather

I can’t wait to rinse it clean

I regret when fury flares;

Can’t take the heat

 

When the froth has settled down,

All the steam evaporated,

The last thing that I want

Is to repeat

Reviews

[ANTO]

A blind man with a seeing eye dog could see that fighting is not in your nature Rita and of course it makes you feel 'dirty' in a way because you veer from your natural nurturing friendly state and onto the dirt-tracks of life. You will always come clean though
X

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Anto - this is good insight. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Well said....................

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you!

[Leonard Birch]

I love your work Rita. Again I was not Disappointed. Thank you.
Leo

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you so much, Leo!

[The Nude Writer]

Another beautiful work :)

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thank you!

[Cassie]

Wow. Loved the way you have metorphorsed it.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Cassie!

[Sharon Kim]

Great metaphor! I've experienced this and always feel bad afterwards. Nicely done, Rita!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Sharon!

[Angel]

And how I hate airing dirty laundry!
Witty write, Rita!
(Try saying that 3 times fast...)

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! A tongue twister! :) Thanks, Angel!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, that rinse cycle should happen once and that is it...we don't want to restart...we hope the angst has dried enough...and doesn't need to be ironed out once it is done getting cleaned out of our system.

[Rita L. Sev]

Exactly... Thanks, Jacob!

[Angi]

I feel the same exact way. Nicely done here. Now I am goning to go take a hot bath. Calgon? Here Calgon...Angi~

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Take me away... :) Thanks, Angi!