Shut Down

Shut Down

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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October 1, 2013

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Government shutdown

block out the Liberty Bell

exposing the crack

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


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Rita L. Sev
Just a thought on current events...

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Deep thoughts with Rita. It is quite a crack isn't it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Indeed it is... Thanks, Lobster.
Brilliant. My God, even the barstool politicians here in Belfast are buzzing and decrying the folly of it all so goodness knows how much of you have got your back up.
The crack is exposed for all to see - like a builder with loose fitting trousers.
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Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! Love that, Anto! Folly indeed - just complete childishness.
Very powerful message here. What would our forefathers think of this? Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

My husband and I talked about that last night. We had dinner in Old City, and passed by the Bell - t.. read more
Well, every "a*s" has one...
I'm ashamed!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

So right you are, David. What a disgrace...
Both sides need their heads knocked together. Yes, they do. Nicely done, Rita. Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Agreed... tired of the childish in fighting... a Stooges-like head knocking would be ironically appr.. read more
My daughter went o vacation to Utah hoping to visit national parks...this was a real disappointment to her...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Independence Park is desolate... not how it should be at all...
I think these politicians are on crack. The problem is, I don't think these two sides will ever get along and we are the ones that will pay the price. Very well done Rita. This one rings a lot of truth.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

They need to stop acting like children, that's for sure - on both sides... Thanks, Jack!
And it is a big crack at that. A 4th grader asked me yesterday why the government was shut down. A very hard question to answer diplomatically! Great current write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Wow - half of my seventh graders didn't even know it was shut down. That's one savvy fourth grader!.. read more
Hear, hear, your Senryu packed a much needed wallop! Good one Rita....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Just a thought - comes from being married to a part-time Ranger at Independence Park. A lot of our .. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

And a very compelling thought at that Rita...

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