Tuesday

Tuesday

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
"

Wiped out...

"

Bounced around all morning

        from this

        to that

Making the frequent switch,

Wearing just the right hat

 

Cup one

Cup two

Gonna need another pot

 

Lunch date

With the copy machine

Chatting with my thoughts

 

Whirling dervish continues

Change of venue,

With the same chaotic beat

 

Running through the maze


To get to the cheese ~

Cold brew and poetries

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
My head is spinning a bit...

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Wine, cheese, and poetry can make any hectic day considerably better. You took us through the chaos with vivid imagery...as if we were watching you run from place to place. I liked it. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Lydi - yes, I did a lot of running that day - some days are like that. Glad I can always com.. read more
I never thought Tuesday had a feel? Now Monday has a feel, lo,.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

LOL! Believe me, this past Tuesday had quite a chaotic feel! :)
Poetry is our tranquilizer...and i always need my fix...enjoyed Rita...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Yep! :) Thank you, Rose!
Ha! Who moved my cheese?
The stinking rat maze!
I get it. I live it some days...
Great capture.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thanks, David - some days there are just no moments of calm...
I hope or we hope our days are less hectic and more peaceful sometimes in this mad world of work or family or school but the good news is that poetry is like our down-times and something that puts smiles on our faces...Bravo

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Exactly, Sami - Poetry is a sanctuary on days like this! Thank you so much!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
You made it to Wednesday...I think. RITA, WAKE UP, IT'S WEDNESDAY!!! Hope the rest of the week is much better for you my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Yay! Wednesday! Well, it's 11am - chaotic, but only an hour to lunch... I can do this! :) Thanks,.. read more
This was perfect for my day yesterday, I share in your Tuesday spinnings, ha, who's the 'cheese' by the way? ;-) Happy Wednesday, or you know what they say....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Perhaps hump day will be gentler... And you all are my cheese! Thanks, Frieda.
This is how I felt yesterday. Good one Rita and I hope today is better

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Must've been just that kind of Tuesday! Thanks, Cassie.
You've captured a whirlwind day with aplomb. I'm a bit breathless myself. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

A whirlwind day it was... Thanks, Blue!

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