Deceptive Hologram

Physics has no business

in matters of heart space

void of formulas, logic or reason

 

Matriculated students of the subliminal

seeking hidden clues

of mutiny or treason

 

In the currency of compassion

fiscal apathy is on the books

Deceptive holograms are painted,

nothingness with reality’s looks

 

Unattractive nature,

a mask of charm juxtaposed

Like a brown and barren lawn

embellished with cheap flamingos  

Author's Note

For the "bad poetry" contest... :)

Reviews

[Jack...]

Very nicley done. Great use of the required words my friend. This is very good (bad).

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes, I don't know if this is good or bad, and I'm not sure which I want it to be... (sort of like the question about vacuum cleaners... if it sucks, is it a good vacuum or a bad vacuum?) Lol! Thanks, Jack!

[Sami Khalil]

I take it as love does not live in three dimentional world where physics define its space, time or matter and for that matter logic or reason. I wonder if chemistry does instead of physics...A very powerful write... You have went against the grain in this one...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

hank you so much, Sami! Definitely against the grain - that list of words took me out of my element. Chemistry... a good possibility!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good to know. You are welcome...:)