Lunchtime

Lunchtime

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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It's lunchtime in school
Like a game of whack-a-mole
sit, stand, sit, stand, sit...

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


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ahaha! they are an energetic bunch for sure. i'm glad mine are grown :)
E.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Mine are perpetually 12... And a new bunch every year! :)
Einstein Noodle

11 Years Ago

well .. there is a reason we do what we do... more power to you! i'm gues'n they love ya
Or Jack ( & Jills ) in the box ?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! Yes, definitely! ;)
Whack-a-mole indeed. Children never can seem to sit still. And then when they get older that energy fades and they don't want to move at all.

Funny how life is like that.

-Caradoc

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

I have seventh graders - asleep at their desks during class, and running around the room at recess a.. read more
Caradoc

11 Years Ago

Sounds hectic.
What a great image. I could picture the scene. It's been a while since I have been in a school cafeteria, but I don't think they ever really change. Cute one. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Kids will always be kids... Mine eat in the classroom, so I do understand that they want to move aro.. read more
I like to sit and stand, just not here, but over there, by the window, where I day dream of a meadow, where I can sit and stand as I please hehe Hi Rita!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Hi, Shaun! You would fit in very well in my classroom... ;)
Shaun Payton

11 Years Ago

Id like that! Haha
Ha! I remember having lunch with my daughter in elementary school. This is just what it is like! Ha! laughing here and I am so, so sorry, Rita. Ha! Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Hey! ;) I am thinking of making a recording of "Sit, please. Sit down. Sit please..."
Can just see you watching the kids as they sit, stand, sit, stand.........up, down, up, down,......lol
As long as there's not a food fight, it is an okay time???

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! Yes, Sheila, they are actually well-behaved - just very ansty! No food fights, but my floor al.. read more
Lol good one Rita:) It pays to be behind on reads, That way they come when they need too:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! Yes, I am slow on the reading this week too - I agree, Jon - poems come to us as we need them.... read more
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11 Years Ago

Welcome freewill writes:)
This is funny...I could see the people standing up...sitting down...standing again...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Welcome to my classroom, Marie! :)
i remember us as kids at lunchtime...i think we would rather play than eat..

different generation.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Oh, they want to get outside to play. They just can't sit still for ten minutes to eat before they .. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

11 Years Ago

that is refreshing to hear...they want to play...outside...

maybe things are changing f.. read more
Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

I have to say, the kids at my school do their share of playing video games, but they love their spor.. read more

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