Rudolph

Rudolph

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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Rudolph the Red-nosed reindeer ~

too bad he had a shiny nose;

whenever someone saw it,

they instantly became his foes

 

Santa and all the reindeer

made him feel like such a freak

teasing and ostracizing

because he had a unique beak

 

Rudolph went out in the snow

alone to face the cold

then he met a dentist elf

and a man who searched for gold

 

On the Island of Misfit Toys

they spent a restless night;

they found the Bumble in his cave

and outwitted all his might

 

When they returned to Christmastown

Santa had the nerve

to ask Rudolph for a favor,

and that deer, he vowed to serve

 

So remember this old story

when you sit upon his lap;

the tale of a selfish Santa

and Rudolph, the red-nosed sap!

 

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Every year, I watch the show "Rudolph the Red-nosed Reindeer", and I am stunned by how mean Santa is in that show. Rudolph is a lot more forgiving than I would be... Oh, and the Island of Misfit Toys? It's really the Island of Santa's Mistakes... :p

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nice piece of writing. Keep on the good work

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Nwanna!
Wow, well done for doing this Rita. Very good, I will sing it to my grand daughter this Christmas.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Well, I don't want to dash anyone's image of Santa... :) Thanks, Daffy!
Daffy

11 Years Ago

She still believes, bless her. Her dad makes a good job of it!
This is fantastic, Rita. I have wondered too....why was Rudolf so nice to Santa and the other reindeer when they were bullying him for so long? Perhaps Rudolf had a better character than we do....or perhaps he was desperate to make friends. Who knows? This was clever and witty and the rhyming was super. I loved it. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Lydi - I rant about this every year, and I recall being a child and wondering why Santa w.. read more

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