Winter Haiku #2

Snow and evergreen

share nature’s seasonal stage

contrast Life and Death

Author's Note

captcha: heatlike. :p

Reviews

[Silvia Corridoni]

Ciao Rita
I am interested in reading your Winter Haiku but I probably do not understand how.
Can you help me?
I have lived 3 years in Finland and the title remember me Finland. Can I read more?
Thanks
Silvia

[Rita L. Sev]

Hi, Silvia - I have only written two Haiku that I titled "Winter Haiku" - the first one can be found here: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/RitaSev/1298055/

[Crusaderscross]

Right up to my style of writing. Words have simple meanings and no need to complicate their meanings. Good one here....

[Rita L. Sev]

Words speak for themselves... Thank you, CC

[Anand Sehgal]

every cycle has its phases. Patches of unequal sizes , of different colours on a pie -chart , is the basic thing that needs to be accepted in the life.
Loved it.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you for your insight, Anand...

[Marie]

I think this is a very optomistic, even though I don't like winter either. Evergreen is forever; snow is not.

[Rita L. Sev]

Holding on and letting go... that important balance... Thank you, Marie!

[Angel]

Mmm...maybe it's just me, but it seems a bit depressing, doesn't it?
Then, again, I don't like winter...never have. Br-r-r-r-r-r-r....

[Rita L. Sev]

The last few days I was a bit dismal... this is probably a residual effect... :) Winter brings it out, I guess.

[Angel]

Once Christmas is over, winter really is pretty dreary.
Even moreso, as far north as you are. At least here, we still have green grass and leaves on the trees to look at...although it is a bit nippy...

[Rita L. Sev]

Nothing here is green. Winter has its own beauty, but the lack of sunlight gets to me a bit...

[Sami Khalil]

Wow Rita. This has so much truth and depth . I love contrast and you have made it so clear...:)..............

[Rita L. Sev]

I live near woods, and when it snows I always think about all the life that still goes on among those trees... Thanks, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:)........................