Hey Look! It's Winter!

Hey Look! It's Winter!

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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Hey Winter, nice to see you!

You look wonderful in white!

How great, you’ve come again so soon;

Your visit’s a delight!

 

(Winter’s been a little crazy,

and I’m filled with apprehension ~

I hope he’ll settle down if we

give positive attention…) 

© 2014 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
It's snowing here... again. And more is on the way this week. OK, Winter - you have our attention...

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The temperature got up to 75 here yesterday...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

That sounds like heaven...
Written like a true teacher! LOL Unfortunately, I doubt Winter will settle down anytime soon. Great personification and rhyming in this poem. I like the humor injected! Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Lydi! Yes, we have missed quite a few days due to snow, and we'll have to make them up later.. read more
Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Of course they do....just like the students here want more hurricane days! :)
hahahahahaah oh Rita, you always do have a way of bringing the fun into the oddest things. somehow I've never quite thought of winter in such high spirits. i really liked this poem,makes winter seem like the dreaded visitor that will inevitably come anyway, it's quirky and fun. well written hey :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much, cycy! I like to find the funny wherever I can... :) And it's all pretty funny!
you gave me such a smile with this one, Rita.

we are so sick of winter here in southern illinois...non-stop...winter mix, sleet, snow, freezing rain...and now that it has tapered off...we are dealing with single digits again--

so tired, he has overstayed his welcome by several weeks.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Exactly what we are getting... days of snow, then bitter cold, then a random spring like day to teas.. read more
Oh man winter is on the loose again,Send some that snow here lol:) They say we are to get some but who knows.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

I would gladly send some if I could, Jon! We've had more than enough!
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10 Years Ago

Its not gotten here yet:(
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10 Years Ago

Wonder if any one would buy snow cones in the winter lol, Hey its an idea he he:)
I guess you all don't have to go to Sochi then for the winter Olympics...Just kidding.
Too much of something is not good I guess. A wonderful winter poem...:)........

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. I do like snow, in manageable amounts. This has been a very snowy winter - you said it.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Yep. You are right...Welcome...:)..................
wow, wish we could have Winter here in Ireland sometime, all it does is rain and rain and then it rains again, nice poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

I'll be glad to send some snow your way, Paddy! Thanks for the read and comment. :)
paddy d daly

10 Years Ago

On second thoughts, its ok, I think the rain is ok for now!
Funny Rita, you're using reverse psychology on old man Winter....ha, nice try, hope it works! Maybe you should try sweet talking Spring too. ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

At this point I'll try anything! Thanks, Frieda!
Haha... we had a brief snow shower earlier...it was pretty but no accumulation. Still waiting for the big one...its been a few years since we've had over four or five inches at one time. ;-). Like this one a lot.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Red. We just keep getting pounded this year. There's still a layer of ice from last week, .. read more
redflutterby

10 Years Ago

Brrr....sounds like it!! Hope you dont get hit with too much more!!

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