Advice

Advice

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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Here now is my best advice

On what you can depend:

 

You need a full-length mirror

And a strictly honest friend

© 2014 Rita L. Sev


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This was funny Rita. Maybe just not too honest. :) Your pen always makes me mile.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

:) Thanks, Will - maybe I should have said "gently honest..."
Giggling here....sometimes it is obvious the fashion police is on vacation and the mirrors are all covered in crepe! Love the wit in this one. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

:) Thanks, Lydi!
Though perhaps before dinner, rather than after. -:)

Seriously though, you are just so absolutely right.

Beccy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

:) True... timing matters! Thanks, Beccy!
Both are honest and ready to give the truth of matters and that matters to us... A wonderful short poem...:)....................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

That's exactly the message I was trying to convey :) Thanks, Sami!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Wow. You are welcome muchly...:)......................
So long as it's not one of those fun house mirrors.
Am I under tall for my weight?

Lol, good one Rita!
Love your humour!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Lol! I am 5'1, definitely "under tall"! Thanks, Ana!
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

Lol! :)
You are a lil cute shorty. I'm tall, or above average height I guess. 5'7.
Does my poetry look fat in these jeans? ;) Leave it to you to tell it like it is Rita....

Does that mirror/friend have carte blanche to tell when someone is full of themselves too?........Now, that'd be a honest friend..take me warts and all but tell me exactly what you see...well said!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Frieda. Yes, I have been blessed with very honest friends, and lost a few who asked for t.. read more
But honesty is toxic if not tactful. Perception is subjective. All mirrors and lenses are somewhat distorted. Our moods filter what we observe each in their own way. Truth is fragmentary and tentative. X-ray vision is needed at times, and at other times infrared vision.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

It's important to look closely at ourselves, and to have good people in our lives who will be truthf.. read more
Sometimes those friends you think are honest, sometimes they just want to make you feel bad and criticize

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

By my definition, a friend never aims to hurt you... but I always appreciate gentle honesty.
or a very good enemy you can keep closer than a friend ;) always a delight to visit your pages Rita
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Ha! I try not to have enemies... a nemesis, maybe... :) Thanks, E!

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