Let's Play

Let's Play

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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a senryu series

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Multicolored bricks
Denmark's pride can build the world
just watch where you step



Twist, Then Shout

A rainbow of dots
precedes contortionist play
getting out of hand



Sock 'Em

Aggressive punches
keep your opponent at bay
but don't lose your head

© 2014 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
A teacher friend gave me homework... ;)

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You win Rita...love that first one, those little rascals really do smart. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Everyone can relate to that... :) Thanks, Frieda!
you do senryus so well...i think you Aced your homework...they are different, but somehow feel interrelated....

and i will watch where i step....but it probably won't be in Denmark.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Classic toys from the 70s... all my friend asked for was a senryu about Legos, but I got carries awa.. read more
Cute senrus, Rita. These things are so much fun.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Classic toys hold such great memories! Thanks, Marie!
I could almost feel the lego beneath my foot as I read the first one. OUCH! Then it was Twister you were referring to, I am certain of it. Finally, rock em sock em something or others....my son used to have them. The heads would come off if you hit them just right. I loved all three of these, Rita. Very clever. Whomever gave you this "assignment" will be happy with the results.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Rock 'em Sock 'em Robots - my father and brother would play for hours! That sound of the eads comin.. read more
Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Yes, that was it! :)

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