Let's Play

Let's Play

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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a senryu series

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Multicolored bricks
Denmark's pride can build the world
just watch where you step



Twist, Then Shout

A rainbow of dots
precedes contortionist play
getting out of hand



Sock 'Em

Aggressive punches
keep your opponent at bay
but don't lose your head

© 2014 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
A teacher friend gave me homework... ;)

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You win Rita...love that first one, those little rascals really do smart. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Everyone can relate to that... :) Thanks, Frieda!
you do senryus so well...i think you Aced your homework...they are different, but somehow feel interrelated....

and i will watch where i step....but it probably won't be in Denmark.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Classic toys from the 70s... all my friend asked for was a senryu about Legos, but I got carries awa.. read more
Cute senrus, Rita. These things are so much fun.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Classic toys hold such great memories! Thanks, Marie!
I could almost feel the lego beneath my foot as I read the first one. OUCH! Then it was Twister you were referring to, I am certain of it. Finally, rock em sock em something or others....my son used to have them. The heads would come off if you hit them just right. I loved all three of these, Rita. Very clever. Whomever gave you this "assignment" will be happy with the results.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Rock 'em Sock 'em Robots - my father and brother would play for hours! That sound of the eads comin.. read more
Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Yes, that was it! :)

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