September Treat

Mother Nature whipped up a treat

so luscious and enticing ~

a summer-sunshine cupcake

with sweet autumn breeze icing

 

Author's Note

Just a comment on the day...

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is a very original-sounding comparison between the change of season & a culinary favorite. Nice rhyme, rhythm, & packed with imagery for such a short write!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you so much, Barleygirl! Glad you enjoyed!

[icelandicblue]

It sounds delicious...seems it was a lovely day. ; )

[Rita L. Sev]

Indeed it was - today is just a bit cooler... Thanks, Blue!

[hansi]

lovely poem. I like your "season" poems. They always draw me a good picture.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Hansi!

[Baby Ricochet]

Sounds like autumn is in the air.

[Rita L. Sev]

Starting to feel the chill... Thanks, Mark.

[realmwriter]

I read that you have been teaching Language Arts for over 20 years, and from what I read here, I could certainly take a lesson or two from you. I love this. The comparison of cupcake to summer, icing to autumn breeze. Do I detect something more in this? To what I refer, only I can know, none the less I think it there. What a lovely write.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Realmwriter, for such kind words! A poem belongs to the Poet only until a Reader joins the party - then the meaning goes deeper. :)

[realmwriter]

You are most welcome. I truly is a beautiful piece. And yes, a poem only belongs to the Poet in so much that it begs to be read. Once that happens, it belongs as much to reader as well.

[Samuel Dickens]

Alright, Rita, you know I can't have sweets. Oh, well....maybe just one. May I have extra autumn breeze icing?

[Rita L. Sev]

Certainly! I think there will be an abundance of delicious zephyrs this season!

[Sami Khalil]

Such a luscious treat indeed Rita from the two seasons. Unique and creative...:)..........

[Rita L. Sev]

It's a lovely time of year, when these seasons collide... :) Thank you, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)........

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ahhhh yes a warm and breezing, such an intoxicating combination… beautifully expressed.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you kindly, Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are most welcome teach :)))

[The Nude Writer]

Lovely :) we didn't have autumn last year.. I hope we have it this year :)

[Rita L. Sev]

The summer was mild, and they are calling for another cold winter - I will relish every nice day I can! Thanks, Sophie!

[Einstein Noodle]

its been a bit of a long day ..even for my retired bones (no nap) :)
so glad for your treat .. i will read it again and sign off ... .. sweet dreams to you Rita!
E.

[Rita L. Sev]

And another day has passed... Thank you, E!