Mystery

And once again

I find myself

Wishing on another falling star

Hunting truth, between right and wrong

Calling on a friend

 

But underneath the deep, vast sea

Freeom flows

Crashing

'Round on the waves

Rivers guiding the crooked way

To the biggest life of all

Like a northern star

A faithful trail of hope

 

Take a breath

Hold it steady

Explore

The whole NEW world

 

A goddess of the sea is near

She's just around the corner

A navigator from ocean's depth

MYSTERY she's called

Reviews

[Windsong]

This is great!! I love how it fits with your name. ^^

[Jazlean]

I love this! I love the ocean its hidden depths filled with mystery...it is never the same, always changing...beautiful and wild! Yes, underneath that glossy, wavy ever changing surface lies another world much different world where there are none of the 'surface' problems...hope. My story "the dive" I wrote a few years ago is about a boy to whom the ocean is an escape from his problems...and I too have felt it's healing effect....
I could read peoms about the ocean all day, and yours is particulary well done...
it paints a well worded picture....
great write, I love it, well done.
~Jazlean

[Emily B]

Mystery. I wondered where a person might find that. Such a beautiful image you've painted here. Amazing.

[Gandré]

sweet. nicely done.
i think that s what people are about: mystery.

[terri james]

Oh I like this one, full oh hope and mystery. It kind of makes you want to ride the waves and see where you end up....T