New pair of wings

  

   halfway in the sun

  I am floating above

  feeling so good now

  could this be love?

  halfway in the clouds

  forgetting to breathe

  feeling so good now

  it's hard to believe

  halfway through life

  the mastery of things

  no looking back now

  a new pair of wings

  halfway home now

  house up the street

  coming down now

  do we ever meet? 

  halfway in touch

  without a phone

  driving me crazy

  halfway alone...

 

Reviews

[Bright Ocean Star]

Rossen, this is an amazing write. I love the refrain of 'halfway' throughout the poem. It is sentimental and romantic and it will stay with me today, I'm sure. Great write!

[Pryde Foltz]

halfway in touch
without a phone
driving me crazy
halfway alone…

The longing of wanting the one you love and who loves you … a pleasant sort of pain. Great write.

[stars are far]

This is so nice..well done :)

[Rossen]

thank you kindly.

[stars are far]

my pleasure

[Corset]

I'm going to copy cat the Cat below and let you know here as well that Viola is beautiful in it's structure and creative originality.

as for this one, it remind me of a song they taught us that was sung by Nat King Cole so beautifully it's called "On the street where you live" here is a link it's forever old! But you might enjoy
https://search.yahoo.com/search;_ylt=AuMpe9ywDhXc1arR07smyWybvZx4?fr=yfp-t-303-s&toggle=1&cop=mss&ei=UTF-8&p=on%20the%20street%20where%20you%20live%20lyrics

[Rossen]

Cool thank's Willy Nelson too https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPKHAsDfy7Q
and thank you for Viola.

[Corset]

I never knew Willie sang this song! That was such a treat, lol, I love Willie! He nailed it! I think I like this version even better than Nat's lol..because it's just so ...unexpected!

[Lyn Anderson]

I love this. Totally get it. I read Viola too, but for some reason no spot to review. of Viola I liked best the beautiful shape to accompany its theme.