On cosmic flowers

for Chloe..Across the Universe

This is the story of the honey potion bee

She crosses the universe for you and for me

When cosmic flowers are ready to bloom

Call out to her she will begin to loom

Powerful honey potion she will pour in your ear

Her message is so reassuring so calm and clear

She crosses the universe and circles for fun

Touching cosmic flowers as they rise with our sun

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sunflower

[KAREN]

Beautiful! Can hear the bees buzzing and see the flowers blooming!!

[Katie Louise Hughes]

this definitely has a psychedelic feel to it! i loved it! :D

[Rory CJ Frankson]

Your cosmic flowers have attracted some pretty potent honey bees, come to read Ros... gotta love Chloe, JR, PJ. I do, and this worth crossing the universe for. Sweet poem you!

[just rose.]

the phrase "honey potion bee" is so sublime i want to keep saying it.

[Babe Roxx]

I love it, your words are playful in its rhyme scheme...exquisite. :)

[pheasant]

sweet honey potion bee... do visit me.
i always love anything cosmic and universal... let the bee fly free.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

"Touching cosmic flowers as they rise with our sun"... that is beautiful.
I would love to touch cosmic flowers... while crossing the Universe..the poem is so smooth, it reads so well and it is very lovely!

Chloe

Thank you an honor for me also an honor to read and review so many wonderful writers and nice people from across the Universe and back.

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beautiful imagery..eloquently written..