Heavens gift

Thank you Emily Burns

feather
falling gracefully
earthly bound
thermal drifting
slowed by clouds
filled with tears
of the sky
gusty wind
a whirling quick
soft shadow
drifting over
broken sprits
reaching fingers
touches down
found by a quill
words flow
poets eyes...





 

Reviews

[MuSe Ampoule]

Beautiful work Rossen! You've really impressed me (and most likely so many others) with your wonderful works honoring and respecting other writers on this sit. You are showing all of us such kindness!

This is a beautiful tribute to Emily and well deserved at that. Thank you for all you do to show light and kindness here!

[The Analog Kid]

This is everyday beauty and VERY poetic. Nice job!

[Arabdha]

amazing..your verses paint a very graceful image..great write :)

[Tommy]

In the eye of the beholder, and when a poet beholds their will conceives a poetic verse, and you have captured this so poetically, the feather flows so light on the page, but can conjure a storm of emotion.

Full of Feel!
RLG,
Tommy

[Maureen Mwaniki]

The sweetest thing i've read all day!i dont knw Emily but i sure do know she'l be touched!
Beautiful!

[Madison A. Wright]

beautiful!!!

[pheasant]

a feather in the weather
touches down...
leaves no sound

[Deviant Works]

Wow... This is amazing, Rossen. The imagery was simply flawless and the way it had ended just took my breath away. I read this out loud a second time, much slower and found it even more riveting. "feather...falling gracefully..." Beautiful. Three words that captivated right from the start. Incredible tribute indeed. The inspiration is evident in each word. Truly perfect!

[KAREN]

Such a beautiful write from a poet! Love the flow. I can picture every word in my mine!!

[Lilly Negoi]

lovely tribute :)