MEET ME

Meet me 
at that lovely place 
where stars are spread 
And sweet springs always lives.

 Meet me, at that place 
where little pieces of snow every time falls 
and a bunch of birds sings in a queer voice 
Where easy wind never come to end. 

Between this mead, under that big tree 
surrounded by this graceful environment 
we talk about love. 

I want to dance with you till the last breath 
I want to live with you till the end 
where desires are untied to move.

Reviews

[S]

When someone is in love, they always desire to be in company of their beloved. Often wanting separation from the rest of the world, where the two love birds can nestle into each other. This poem beautifully describes one such place. Very simple yet a very good piece.

[MomzillaNC]

Very lovely and romantic

NOTES: I recommend another pass for grammar, focusing particularly on plurals.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh-ohaw! how simply it flowed down saying every word of love when it's actually really deep and strong .Amazing poem !!

[Gurleen Saluja]

Beautiful piece on love. Thanks for sharing.

[Saddam]

Thank You very much dear.................

[Matching Socks]

Beautifully expressed sentiments of love my dear.
You've captured those so well here. :-)
Like a piece of heaven.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

In this one piece, I see a glimmer of promise in your writing. Sadly, the broken English really detracts from the content of the poem; and I can only imagine how beautiful this would be in your native tongue. There is so much romanticism in the poetry of other languages around the world that gets lost in translation. I admire your willingness to share a little piece of yourself with others. Speaking on behalf of myself, my inability to read in your native tongue, prohibits me from being able to appreciate the real beauty of what I'm sure you intended.

[John Anderson]

quite thought-provoking. A well written poem!

[BlackRose]

Beautifully done. You write well these days getting better each time you do. No one likes to be without the company of the one they love, but share in the days and nights all they have together.

[My Favorite Writer !]

One fine line "I want to dance with you till the last breath " held me bounded !! a Beautiful work indeed :)

[Priyanshi Dass]

Beautifully written, sir. Stunning imagery. Love is an incredible pure emotion which you've portrayed here superbly. Well done.

[Saddam]

I am not Sir dear, just a scholar who want to find a way and you can say poetry is just make me happy.