MEET ME

Meet me 
at that lovely place 
where stars are spread 
And sweet springs always lives.

 Meet me, at that place 
where little pieces of snow every time falls 
and a bunch of birds sings in a queer voice 
Where easy wind never come to end. 

Between this mead, under that big tree 
surrounded by this graceful environment 
we talk about love. 

I want to dance with you till the last breath 
I want to live with you till the end 
where desires are untied to move.

Reviews

[S]

When someone is in love, they always desire to be in company of their beloved. Often wanting separation from the rest of the world, where the two love birds can nestle into each other. This poem beautifully describes one such place. Very simple yet a very good piece.

[Sami Khalil]

I want to dance with you till the last breath
I want to live with you till the end
Where desires is untied to move.

[Saddam]

nice of you sir..

[Sami Khalil]

Any time...Please send some read requests if you post new things...Up to you though...:)................

[Saddam]

always sir, I think you just like my mentor....Your and all poet's advice is very valuable for me...thank you Sir.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[MsJewel]

I love romantic poetry - and this is exquisite.

I want to dance with you til the last breath (sigh)
to feel love like that is amazing.

You have a beautiful heart my friend and it shines in every line of your gorgeous poem
:) Julie

[Saddam]

thank you dear poet...

[Penny]

Very nyc poem.. And emotion it focuses on... I'm sure v all must hv felt once at least. Keep it up.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much...

[Penny]

Anytime...

[Heidi]

easy to read, easy to understand the feeling you like to describe,
I like it!

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot....

[Heidi]

Keep on writing......

[Sami Khalil]

This sounded like Sufi poems which I love alot...Bravo