MEET ME

Meet me 
at that lovely place 
where stars are spread 
And sweet springs always lives.

 Meet me, at that place 
where little pieces of snow every time falls 
and a bunch of birds sings in a queer voice 
Where easy wind never come to end. 

Between this mead, under that big tree 
surrounded by this graceful environment 
we talk about love. 

I want to dance with you till the last breath 
I want to live with you till the end 
where desires are untied to move.

Reviews

[S]

When someone is in love, they always desire to be in company of their beloved. Often wanting separation from the rest of the world, where the two love birds can nestle into each other. This poem beautifully describes one such place. Very simple yet a very good piece.

[writ rajat]

This is romantic, Ssadd. It reminds me of my college sweetheart when we used to date/meet in a particular place where only our love is what we can feel- it's the biggest acacia tree in our school. But loving at young age will really not ensure a lasting love. After our break-up, I haven't seen that tree anymore...only in my memories...during passing thoughts like this.Love, an in-depth obscured undefinable emotional desire, which evolves another living being within your psyche and soul and the human beings who are one of the ambiguous natural products of the evolutionary process are the only living beings who can delve into and intrinsically feel this intuitive phenomenon.Thus, what you imply within your writing can be evaluated as a momentary nostalgic time travel to the past with the intention of absorbing the solace from your long buried LOVE.This is so very sad and bittersweet, SSADD. I'm actually glad that I read your comment below, or I might have misinterpreted the poem.

It makes me think of a vision of paradise, actually...a love that has no beginning and no end. I've been writing about that too lately (although with different wording). Although the physical person may be gone, I'm sure that your love will live on eternally in your heartThis is such a sweet fantasy...meeting your lover far away from the real world "at that lovely place ,where stars are spread And sweet springs always lives."
Enjoyed reading !Lovely lines... how I wish I had experienced this moments when I was younger under that big tree with someone talking about love and just only love, not plans, enjoying the sweet talks...
this poem is indeed beautiful..

[Nimesha Amarasooriya]

Love, an in-depth obscured undefinable emotional desire, which evolves another living being within your psyche and soul and the human beings who are one of the ambiguous natural products of the evolutionary process are the only living beings who can delve into and intrinsically feel this intuitive phenomenon.Thus, what you imply within your writing can be evaluated as a momentary nostalgic time travel to the past with the intention of absorbing the solace from your long buried LOVE.

[Saddam]

Deeply Thanks to you dear. Looking forword for your write.

[David Moreland]

Indeed romantic. Captures the longing of someone in love, a desire to be met at that special place ... "I want to live with you till the end" ... a place that lasts forever, up to that last breath. What a controversy love is!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. Appreciate you much.

[Eric Pudalov]

This is so very sad and bittersweet, SSADD. I'm actually glad that I read your comment below, or I might have misinterpreted the poem.

It makes me think of a vision of paradise, actually...a love that has no beginning and no end. I've been writing about that too lately (although with different wording). Although the physical person may be gone, I'm sure that your love will live on eternally in your heart.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend for your time and words. It is very interesting but you have found my other side. Actually I write it with my light heart. Appreciate your words.

[Vaishali Roopesh]

This has to be one of your best poems Ssadd! I love it! Cheers x

[Saddam]

Love you review dear... Thanks

[Radhika]

This is such a sweet fantasy...meeting your lover far away from the real world "at that lovely place ,where stars are spread And sweet springs always lives."
Enjoyed reading !

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear for you kind words...

[star73]

I'm a romantic at heart I never experienced that yet I have a place where my husband and I first met but not a special place. We will have to work on that and find a special place.

[Saddam]

every one in their heart feel a special thing this is mine. Thanks, a hope you will soon find your beautiful place. Love you dear.

[Tina Louise UK]

So very beautiful...you do romance well :) x

[Saddam]

thanks a lot. No any more romance.

[danish]

Very powerful nd romantic write...well done

[Saddam]

its feel very good to hear you dear friend.

[David Scott]

You know, birds do have a funny voice... I never thought of that. I just assumed it was kind of normal. Ha.
It is good to have another meet you in a special place and a special state of mind. This is true oneness.

[Saddam]

thank you very much sir....carefully listen them they talk too....very lovely way.