AN EVENING

At the time of evening

She was at opposite roof of him

And he was other side of road

Eyes were on each other

They were smiling for no reason.

 

Aware with the others, yet…

Hearts blooms when he sends flying kiss

She catches it

Cover her face with same hand.

 

When mislead wind play with her hair

That time her DUPATTA hovering

Making trouble

She tries it to hold properly

He smirked on her blend behavior

Girl snidely got angry

Stumpy turn around

Then he caught his ear with queer face

And she burst into laugh. 

Reviews

[Lyndy]

I like this poem and its ambience! Perfectly written and well done! :D

[Prabha Salimath]

Its sweet and melodious love poem beautiful liked it SSADD.

[Saddam]

Thank you sweet friend for your kind visit and glad you like it.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

love the cheesiness it really happens with the love birds here in Asia
Oh and the idea of adding original piece is good !

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.............. You are very energetic.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh haha thank u and welcome !

[Vanesa Markovic]

Sweet write!
Loved the original picture included!
-VM

[Zahra]

A cute poem. A beautifully captured scene.

[DIVYA]

Very well narrated Ssadd. I love the nuances and expressions in the poem. One small suggesstion...for Hindi words, please add a transalation in English, below the poem.

[Saddam]

Really I will do the same next time. Thanks for reading and reviewing it.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such a cute and unquie poem. :-))

Kaze~

[Deepika]

that's a cute poem making up for a lovely evening

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend....

[Afraa]

Very unique poem. Loved the images I was getting in my head.

[Kasey Miriam]

Sweet and simple with good flow. Very well done!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.